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Artemis
Artemis
Deep fire blue
Of Gaia's ocean from the moon
Where Luna laughs on the dark side
With Chantilly lipstick prism lace
Whose rainbow is the crescent earthrise
That Luna lassoes in fiery tresses
Like a sliver of night
In the tentacle trance of Medusa Mysticism
Deep fire blue
Of Gaia's ocean from the moon
Where Luna laughs on the dark side
With Chantilly lipstick prism lace
Whose rainbow is the crescent earthrise
That Luna lassoes in fiery tresses
Like a sliver of night
In the tentacle trance of Medusa Mysticism
Published 16th Dec 2022
| Edited 17th Dec 2022
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17th Dec 2022 5:54am
17th Dec 2022 6:02am
Love that this was exciting and wicked for you. That is my favorite response to my poetry.
John
John
17th Dec 2022 6:26pm
19th Dec 2022 9:37pm
I love this collection of fragments. Little snippets of imagery, and little phrases which play on sounds, alliteration and assonance. It reminds me about the process of writing poetry, as well as being a piece of art in and of itself.
19th Dec 2022 9:46pm
Love that this brought to mind the process of writing poetry for you my friend. Indeed this is kind of a little collage of imagery strung together by the theme of the moon and Luna. Most happy this was artful for you. You made my day.
John
John
19th Dec 2022 9:51pm
I'm so pleased!
I've started to dip into your back catalogue and will be back often. Honestly, I'm not into erotica at ALL, or love poetry really. HOWEVER, I've glanced at a few and yours are more classy, beautiful and artistic than 99% of the erotica on here, which is usually a combination of porn and foul language.
You do have a talent for observation, taking in all of the senses and describing natural forces in terms of people (and vice versa). I look forward to reading many more of your pieces about people, places and events.
I've started to dip into your back catalogue and will be back often. Honestly, I'm not into erotica at ALL, or love poetry really. HOWEVER, I've glanced at a few and yours are more classy, beautiful and artistic than 99% of the erotica on here, which is usually a combination of porn and foul language.
You do have a talent for observation, taking in all of the senses and describing natural forces in terms of people (and vice versa). I look forward to reading many more of your pieces about people, places and events.
19th Dec 2022 9:55pm
I do have a back catalog of Americana that I am only recently revisited in my poetry. Love that this appealed to you and that when I touch on the erotic it is classy as opposed to the graphic. I posted some of my stories labeled erotic on another site dedicated to that genre and was told by an admin as well as the writers that there was nothing erotic about my writing. I felt encouraged by that commentary.
John
John
19th Dec 2022 9:58pm
I'm pleased that I've also found poems including music and mermaids... two of my great loves, so I'll be right at home here. Yes, you are one of the very few that does erotica in a subtle, sensitive and beautiful way. It's not something that I ever really read except out of curiosity, but I'm heartened to know that somebody here is approaching the topic with respect.
19th Dec 2022 10:08pm
I probably shouldn't post any of my poetry in the erotic section as like you so wonderfully point out it is about myth and art and passion rather that anything really risque. Love that my respect for the beauty of the human form and its dignity speaks to you. You have made me very happy through your appreciation of my art. I am most grateful for your appreciation of my words.
John
John
19th Dec 2022 10:11pm
