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What the grateful have
Each good moment is eternal
you could live in each so well
such a contrast
to the losers
one dread moment
judgment fell
the sweet sweet incense
of such highs
rises forever
like the smoke
of eternal
burning hell
you could live in each so well
such a contrast
to the losers
one dread moment
judgment fell
the sweet sweet incense
of such highs
rises forever
like the smoke
of eternal
burning hell
Published 14th Dec 2022
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14th Dec 2022 5:46am
Dear EW,
I really enjoyed this piece. I’m reminded to appreciate what I’m given that’s good amidst the stuff I’m not so happy about. Great write. H🌷
I really enjoyed this piece. I’m reminded to appreciate what I’m given that’s good amidst the stuff I’m not so happy about. Great write. H🌷
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- Edited 14th Dec 2022 5:51am
14th Dec 2022 5:50am
Likewise. I second Honoria
15th Dec 2022 2:23am
