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secret lover
I climb the notes to be where you are
some where in the stratosphere we touch
lingering too long on our way elsewhere
I kiss the skies and see your eyes star gazing at me
to dream a dream me and you together
little moments of lust and love
assure me of your meaning
I seek the dawn of your creation
I think we met there somehow
traveling through the mysteries
knowing each other inside
cracking the code to my heart
for, it's written on your soul
taste the day I was more than a spark
that day your name was written on my heart
I am yours on the aether and down deep where it counts
until we meet again, keep me close
my secret lover over faith
we are in love
Published 13th Dec 2022
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13th Dec 2022 9:39pm
Secrets are such devilish things.
Loved the line, "I kiss the skies and see your eyes star gazing at me." 🌼
Loved the line, "I kiss the skies and see your eyes star gazing at me." 🌼
13th Dec 2022 9:48pm
"little moments of lust and love
assure me of your meaning"
It's amazing how far and deep this can go in those brief moments.
Exquisite spill.
assure me of your meaning"
It's amazing how far and deep this can go in those brief moments.
Exquisite spill.
14th Dec 2022 8:50pm
So much beauty in this write. This is my favourite... "I am yours on the aether and down deep where it counts"
That connection is everything...
❤k
That connection is everything...
❤k
16th Dec 2022 3:44pm
Oh, this is magnificent.
It is difficult to catch the excitement of a secret lover. ;)
But you have done that so incredibly here.
Climbing the notes to make that connection.
Perhaps it's a parking lot, lunch, a conference room, mmmmm....
Anywhere you can find. Passion inflamed.
Wanting to linger forever but knowing it's finite.
The sky and stars voyeur to a forbidden union.
Grasping every moment of lust and love...
Feeling like you have known one another since creation.
So attracted to the sin. Taking a bite over and over.
You know it's wrong but the temptation is too great.
To travel through the mysteries and to earn Hell.
The code to my body written on the soul, lock and key.
Needing it to be inserted every time, opening me completely.
'down deep where it counts' oh YES! definitely there...
Until we meet again, we will both be dying for it.
To open that door to the heart, body, and soul.
Every chance we get....
It is difficult to catch the excitement of a secret lover. ;)
But you have done that so incredibly here.
Climbing the notes to make that connection.
Perhaps it's a parking lot, lunch, a conference room, mmmmm....
Anywhere you can find. Passion inflamed.
Wanting to linger forever but knowing it's finite.
The sky and stars voyeur to a forbidden union.
Grasping every moment of lust and love...
Feeling like you have known one another since creation.
So attracted to the sin. Taking a bite over and over.
You know it's wrong but the temptation is too great.
To travel through the mysteries and to earn Hell.
The code to my body written on the soul, lock and key.
Needing it to be inserted every time, opening me completely.
'down deep where it counts' oh YES! definitely there...
Until we meet again, we will both be dying for it.
To open that door to the heart, body, and soul.
Every chance we get....
