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So he falls

He falls
remembering all the promises,
remembering all the prayers,
remembering all the preachings.

He falls
opening spaces in the clouds,
opening craters in the ground,
opening the flames in the fire.

Then he falls...

PAR

Written by PAR

(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)

Published 12th Dec 2022

#despair #fall #frustration

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Re. So he falls

Anonymous

- Edited 12th Dec 2022 6:22pm

12th Dec 2022 6:18pm

And We
fall And
we fall and
we fall and
we fall and
and we fall
and we fall

But, like Icarus, we're writing
ourselves a story, vellum
parchment, slate, feathers, wax

tablets,
styluses and

ground fall
and all

Lucky us, though. We get to write other stories to ourselves too

Occasionally

It works out that way