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Rain at Window
mourning doves,
first light
how long, how long
should you wait
beginnings more
beautiful than endings
first light
how long, how long
should you wait
beginnings more
beautiful than endings
Published 9th Dec 2022
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9th Dec 2022 4:53am
10th Dec 2022 2:42pm
9th Dec 2022 5:18am
Dear T,
I enjoyed your formatting and each verse was a poem in itself. Great write. H🌷
I enjoyed your formatting and each verse was a poem in itself. Great write. H🌷
10th Dec 2022 2:43pm
How a poem is presented visually as important as the words. Thank you for your words.
