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a poem unfinish'd

"in a sea of human footprints
and words' ..oft, loudly  
uncomfortable  
 
‘half comedy / half agony’  
 disturbing core elements  
 
 
 
                thusly it's a  
castration of beauty...  
 
 
seeking  my one and only  
haven where no'thing  
else is allow'd  
but to  just be ..I hide away  
 
 
bedaubed hair  
a surrender of self emerges  
   
expos'd by his nomadic hands  
demanding a sum of my  
deepest bits  
 
always refreshing with him,  
 
and somehow, each time,  
I.. I come to understand  
I' reflectively cum into understanding  
I calm to understand  
just how much unused  
burning room one can truly have"  
"  
 
 
 
 
 
 
she never titled this one but I find exquisitely consuming. So it's in raw just as she  
left it.
Written by Particles_Of_HerII
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Author's Note
•I call'd it war paint given as a peace offering..
   -you call,d it a harvesting of love°°Noire Rose
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