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green
I'm hurting in the green of you
tears sting my face
an upturned daisy seeking the sun
clouds shadow from your gaze
my petals turn inward from the cold
I seek comfort where I can
to die at winter's hands
cruel fate
my soul glazed over at the chill
the winds bellow
I saw you on the horizon
I turned away
I followed the sun, instead
where green is still beautiful
Published 8th Dec 2022
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11th Dec 2022 11:55pm
Lovely images and emotions here along with the metaphors left to open to interpretation and relatable to the reader.
Great work.
Great work.
12th Dec 2022 2:42am
thank you graciously dearest Wally yes I like the readers to go where they want within a poem 💕
