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love and dead fish
your love is a rotting
dead fish impaled
upon the tusk of a
slobbering wild bore
being trampled to death
by a pack of rabid camels
under a microwave sun in
a skeletal desert
(there...now it's out in
the open).
Published 8th Dec 2022
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2022 2:08pm
Fair
8th Dec 2022 2:54pm
8th Dec 2022 2:26pm
8th Dec 2022 2:55pm
8th Dec 2022 2:39pm
hello Kitty my love may well be all those things I don't know
I suppose given to the wrong heart....
I suppose given to the wrong heart....
8th Dec 2022 2:57pm
I would seriously doubt your love could be any of those things.
hugs,
buddhakitty
hugs,
buddhakitty
8th Dec 2022 2:46pm
8th Dec 2022 2:58pm
11th Dec 2022 11:46pm
11th Dec 2022 11:52pm
Much thanks, wally. Sometimes you can make the truth absurd.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
