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News Flash
Positive affirmations
wannabe monks in formation
staved by the light
feeding on rainbows trite
thinking our darkness evil
or something primeval
news flash
You can't get to heaven with half a soul
taijitu, make the two halves whole
find stillness in your movements
seeking simple attunement
look into the dark
and find the fire's spark
to light your path
for humanity's cosmic dance
wannabe monks in formation
staved by the light
feeding on rainbows trite
thinking our darkness evil
or something primeval
news flash
You can't get to heaven with half a soul
taijitu, make the two halves whole
find stillness in your movements
seeking simple attunement
look into the dark
and find the fire's spark
to light your path
for humanity's cosmic dance
Published 7th Dec 2022
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7th Dec 2022 7:47pm
Anonymous
7th Dec 2022 7:55pm
This is so...
9th Dec 2022 6:06pm
8th Dec 2022 6:47am
Dear R,
I paused for thought with this one. It made me think about reflecting and accounting for one’s actions, so important. I really enjoyed this poem. H🌷
I paused for thought with this one. It made me think about reflecting and accounting for one’s actions, so important. I really enjoyed this poem. H🌷
9th Dec 2022 6:05pm
To make one pause for a second and reflect is all any writer could ever ask for. You honor me.
8th Dec 2022 1:26pm
'You can't get to heaven with half a soul' that's so true. Without the darkness we would have stuck in the Garden of Eden, never exploring, never experiencing, never being challenged. There would have been no way to get to heaven there. Is Satan, the adversary, just an extension of God's will to test us with the darkness so that we feel everything. I love the use of tajitu here. I was tuned by the darkness, so many things are hidden there. The light reveals the least of me and so you must look into the dark. But there are always sparks of passion to lead the way. I really love this APPS. You are indeed a beautiful shaman.
There was no snake in Eden was there? you just made it up. The apple was the key to opening the door, to opening up the depth of our souls. You picked the apple yourself and needed a fall guy. You should apologize to the snake and then share the apple with me.
10th Dec 2022 12:52pm
Shhhh.... you aren't supposed to give away my secrets damnit! Here's an apply now hush... ;)
