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Open to the World
When I open
myself to the world,
more love than I
could have imagined
greets my open arms.
When I fall into embrace of men,
my core cries with relief
at finding home. My
mind in clear thought,
gives me to creation's
unconstrained desires.
myself to the world,
more love than I
could have imagined
greets my open arms.
When I fall into embrace of men,
my core cries with relief
at finding home. My
mind in clear thought,
gives me to creation's
unconstrained desires.
Published 28th Nov 2022
| Edited 29th Nov 2022
Author's Note
A poem from my daughter. Should I worry?
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28th Nov 2022 4:39pm
28th Nov 2022 6:40pm
I say with Naajir get clarification from her about what she is meaning.
The first verse reminded me of a blog I read on a Christian dating site I subscribe to about body language for dating. It advised holding your hands across your chest tends to signal 'don't come near', open gestures are in. Is she describing her favoured body language and the welcome she finds it get her?
The first verse reminded me of a blog I read on a Christian dating site I subscribe to about body language for dating. It advised holding your hands across your chest tends to signal 'don't come near', open gestures are in. Is she describing her favoured body language and the welcome she finds it get her?
28th Nov 2022 11:48pm
Yes, you should worry, Nizana, in case you rely on your daughter too much & don't come up with enough of your own ideas/ original material cos she may as well be on DUP too, competing with you maybe? Just a thought.
29th Nov 2022 00:03am
Yes, I've told her to register but she laughs and says this is our communication tool. We could still trade poems I tell her. She's hardheaded like her mom.
29th Nov 2022 00:04am
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29th Nov 2022 2:15am
Now it's your turn to find love and write about your hot sexual experience. Keep on writing.
