deepundergroundpoetry.com
If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
Cutting up fruit for my oatmeal
Same process
Everyday
Wash fruit
Berries and apples
Add ground flaxseed
Pumpkin seeds
Add water and almond milk
Cook
This morning I thought of you
I want to tell you..
I Love You
It has nothing to do with sex
Tits or ass
It's you
Your soul
You matter
I'm eating
I'm writing
I'm telling you I love you
Want you to know
Now you do
You knew before
Can't tell some enough
Same process
Everyday
Wash fruit
Berries and apples
Add ground flaxseed
Pumpkin seeds
Add water and almond milk
Cook
This morning I thought of you
I want to tell you..
I Love You
It has nothing to do with sex
Tits or ass
It's you
Your soul
You matter
I'm eating
I'm writing
I'm telling you I love you
Want you to know
Now you do
You knew before
Can't tell some enough
Author's Note
Flower Image by Poetspeak
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 15
reading list entries 7
comments 37
reads 418
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Jul 2023 3:46am
27th Nov 2022 2:01pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 2:12pm
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 2:11pm
The title got me and as soon as I opened the page and was greeted by the image, I knew I was in for a treat.
Such an explosion of love. This made me smile.
Love the painting and the simple yet profound way your words work the page.
Love the art and poem.
HUGE LIKE
Such an explosion of love. This made me smile.
Love the painting and the simple yet profound way your words work the page.
Love the art and poem.
HUGE LIKE
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 2:14pm
I just switched the art so hope you like this one as well
When the urge cones to speak love .... I try to get it out there, sometimes it doesn't happen but today it did !!
Thx so much Her
APPRECIATE
When the urge cones to speak love .... I try to get it out there, sometimes it doesn't happen but today it did !!
Thx so much Her
APPRECIATE
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 2:16pm
Saw the new image after I posted my comment. You never disappoint, Gary. Lovin’ it!
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 2:24pm
I wanted the image to be sunnier, more upbeat
Thanks always for ýour support Mary !
Thanks always for ýour support Mary !
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 2:52pm
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 3:02pm
It is indeed Pink
Gives life
Strength
Needs to be said ......often
Thx so much
🤠❤
Gives life
Strength
Needs to be said ......often
Thx so much
🤠❤
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 3:07pm
good morning dearest Poet nothing more beautiful
than to be loved so completely, for you soul ❤️
than to be loved so completely, for you soul ❤️
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
Yes Brenda
If the soul is beautiful, I will find it.. and love it
Thank you
❤❤❤
If the soul is beautiful, I will find it.. and love it
Thank you
❤❤❤
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 3:36pm
Uplifting... bravo PS... when a Scorpio says "I Love You"... you had better listen... and not betray...
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 4:11pm
YES
SCORPIO LOGIC
Sometimes I feel like I sit on my hands too much when I want to tell someone I love them. There's all kinds of love. I'm doing my best to be more vocal. Hoping someone listens ...
BIG THANKS LIL
SCORPIO LOGIC
Sometimes I feel like I sit on my hands too much when I want to tell someone I love them. There's all kinds of love. I'm doing my best to be more vocal. Hoping someone listens ...
BIG THANKS LIL
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
27th Nov 2022 4:17pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 4:18pm
I rarely think of myself as a poet but I keep writing poems...
I truly appreciate you Jay
Thank you !
I truly appreciate you Jay
Thank you !
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 4:46pm
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 5:20pm
I'm a morning person so I'm more likely to tell you I love you
In the AM. I'm pretty useless after 5pm ...
In the AM. I'm pretty useless after 5pm ...
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 4:50pm
Aw, I do love it when you get all mushy. 😍😊 Why is it so hard to believe when someone tells us this? Who knows... Years of conditioning, maybe. I hope whoever this is for gets the message....
The art you chose is the same that you graciously gifted me to go with one of my songs. And it matches up with this poem perfectly. 😊 I hope you don't mind it doing double duty.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/435323-untitled-for-now/
Keep wooing us with your sweet side...
❤️k
The art you chose is the same that you graciously gifted me to go with one of my songs. And it matches up with this poem perfectly. 😊 I hope you don't mind it doing double duty.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/435323-untitled-for-now/
Keep wooing us with your sweet side...
❤️k
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 5:27pm
I guess my mush is good if the person I'm telling I love them appreciates being told. Love telling has to be done at the right time. Maybe there should be a signal for love telling like a yellow light on a traffic signal ? I don't know.
Having had a recent death in my family opened my eyes a bit to saying stuff I feel....
Glad you liked my image to use with your poem. I don't mind double dipping.
Thx ❤
X
Having had a recent death in my family opened my eyes a bit to saying stuff I feel....
Glad you liked my image to use with your poem. I don't mind double dipping.
Thx ❤
X
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 6:06pm
Yeah, death really hits it home, doesn't it. You just never know when it's going to be too late...
Fuck. 😢
❤️
Fuck. 😢
❤️
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 8:04pm
Death of someone close in blood is like a hangover. It will take it's damn time to fade some but never really goes away...
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 6:05pm
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 9:06pm
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 9:26pm
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 6:09pm
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
27th Nov 2022 9:07pm
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
28th Nov 2022 1:29am
Love is in your heart tonight. You treat her with Kindness and Respect and never let her go. Keep on writing.
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
28th Nov 2022 1:48am
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
28th Nov 2022 1:52am
Awh - this is so sweet. You make fixing oatmeal into
a form of love. Catering to it with such detail.
Bravo amigo:)
a form of love. Catering to it with such detail.
Bravo amigo:)
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
28th Nov 2022 1:57am
Never thought oatmeal and love would jive together but when I'm making breakfast a lot of other thoughts are in my head.
Appreciate the nod Adel
You know a lot about love.
Dig your comment Chica
Thx
Appreciate the nod Adel
You know a lot about love.
Dig your comment Chica
Thx
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
28th Nov 2022 6:47am
Dear PS,
It’s in the simplest acts where the greatest love is found and I think this poem perfectly reflects that. I concur with all the lovely comments above and as they’ve all used the perfect words to define the emotion of this write I’ll just tip my hat in agreement. But it’s also the ability to recognize that love and honor it as you’ve done in this piece. The painting exudes the brightness and energy of the emotion. Everything is so beautifully harmonious in this piece. H🌷
It’s in the simplest acts where the greatest love is found and I think this poem perfectly reflects that. I concur with all the lovely comments above and as they’ve all used the perfect words to define the emotion of this write I’ll just tip my hat in agreement. But it’s also the ability to recognize that love and honor it as you’ve done in this piece. The painting exudes the brightness and energy of the emotion. Everything is so beautifully harmonious in this piece. H🌷
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
28th Nov 2022 9:51am
Dear H,
I had a recent death in my family. My first cousin passed a few weeks ago. She lived a courageous battle against addiction but ultimately lost the battle. I can't say I agreed with her lifestyle but in her last months of life we connected briefly. We talked about life and a lot about art. I sent her a few of my paintings and they will live on with her family.
I made a vow to myself after she passed to connect with the people I love around me and let them know how much I care for them.
This is one of the stories .....
I appreciate your comment so much.
Lots of ❤❤
PS
🤠
I had a recent death in my family. My first cousin passed a few weeks ago. She lived a courageous battle against addiction but ultimately lost the battle. I can't say I agreed with her lifestyle but in her last months of life we connected briefly. We talked about life and a lot about art. I sent her a few of my paintings and they will live on with her family.
I made a vow to myself after she passed to connect with the people I love around me and let them know how much I care for them.
This is one of the stories .....
I appreciate your comment so much.
Lots of ❤❤
PS
🤠
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
28th Nov 2022 7:30am
Really dig the pic.
Goes well with the very loving poem. Real human sentiment.
Goes well with the very loving poem. Real human sentiment.
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
28th Nov 2022 9:54am
I appreciate you DC
We are similar. Firestarters. We say what we feel.
It's actually pretty simple and achievable.
Thank you good man !!
We are similar. Firestarters. We say what we feel.
It's actually pretty simple and achievable.
Thank you good man !!
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
6th Dec 2022 8:52pm
It's those little moments when doing ordinary things when the emotions pour out, like almond milk, to nourish the body and soul.
Great stuff Poet.
BIG LIKE
Great stuff Poet.
BIG LIKE
0
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
6th Dec 2022 9:09pm
Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
11th Apr 2023 4:54am
Re: Re. If I Tell You I Love You .... Believe It
11th Apr 2023 12:16pm