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Fucking me up
The pain was real
But I wanted him still
It wasn’t physical
But a mental thing
The type of pain
I can’t explain
How it never was
What it really was
Cause
We never gave
What we should have gave
We just played
And now
It’s all fucked up
I’m giving us up
I can’t do this pain
He and I aren’t the same
Our situation ain’t evolving
We revolving
Around in circles
These hurdles
Are too high
No effort’s being applied
There’s really no development
I rather just
Dead this shit
Be done with it
But I don’t know
I don’t know how
To let him go
Many times I tried
To release this guy
Back to the streets
But the sex be
Fucking me up
But I wanted him still
It wasn’t physical
But a mental thing
The type of pain
I can’t explain
How it never was
What it really was
Cause
We never gave
What we should have gave
We just played
And now
It’s all fucked up
I’m giving us up
I can’t do this pain
He and I aren’t the same
Our situation ain’t evolving
We revolving
Around in circles
These hurdles
Are too high
No effort’s being applied
There’s really no development
I rather just
Dead this shit
Be done with it
But I don’t know
I don’t know how
To let him go
Many times I tried
To release this guy
Back to the streets
But the sex be
Fucking me up
Published 25th Nov 2022
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25th Nov 2022 8:47pm
It's reality
When you feel disgusted
Even out of love
gets boring when
The other party does not respond
It becomes a waste of time
when it becomes one-sided
it gets cold
Because the emotional warmth is gone
Search becomes Fucking up
Because we do not find in the pleasure that was like the past
When you feel disgusted
Even out of love
gets boring when
The other party does not respond
It becomes a waste of time
when it becomes one-sided
it gets cold
Because the emotional warmth is gone
Search becomes Fucking up
Because we do not find in the pleasure that was like the past
25th Nov 2022 9:24pm
25th Nov 2022 11:00pm
26th Nov 2022 2:40am
Sometimes it can be the right person but not the right situation. And vice versa.
Great poem.
Great poem.
26th Nov 2022 5:53am
The illusion of love trapped in mind by the onset of lust and delusional thought
27th Nov 2022 1:27am
The frantic pacing underscores the conflict. I like the raw edginess. Nicely done.
