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Intimate picnic ( part 4)
I know, I feel like you were ready to take off,
but I want more, I don't want it to end so soon.
I lower her from her perch, twist your hips,
and your displeasure turns to desire with a small moan of approval.
your buttocks then offered are just waiting for me
to come back to the assault.
What I do immediately.
One hand on your rump, the other directing
my stake towards your throbbing sheath of desire,
I enter you wildly. No waiting, no pause
this time I pound her straight, hard, fast, I'm inhabited,
transcended by your den sliding quickly around me, your buttocks slamming hard against me
with each thrust, ever louder .
My hands knead your posterior,
grab your hips to get even further inside you
It is so good. So wild.
I can hear him trying to hold back your screams.
I'm having a hard time controlling mine too.
you arch your back even more so that
I can go even further. I feel your little hole calling me.
My fingers are irresistibly attracted.
As I give him powerful thrusts,
I slide my finger to soak him with your excitement, then I massage his eyelet which opens on its own as I pass.
Each turn expands it a little more until a knuckle
is snapped up. Very quickly,
my whole finger slides into you in rhythm with my thrusts.
your pleasure seems increased tenfold
I hear it even louder.
I feel your whole body spasming,
your lair throbbing around me, contracting.
I feel myself leaving too, growing in you.
I myself am covered with shivers
the whole body in turmoil,
I stick to you to explode with a rare intensity.
I feel your heartbeat all around my engine contracted by your body.
We enjoy together, it's so good,so strong
This unusual place further enhances our pleasure.
We stay inside each other for a long time,
against each other, short of breath,
jolts run through our bodies,
in total ecstasy.
Published 25th Nov 2022
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25th Nov 2022 12:38pm
Icing on the cake - a doggy session. Like the way you pronoun her vagina and 'yourself' as 'her' and 'him' respectively. Favourite set of lines:
One hand on your rump, the other directing
my stake towards your throbbing sheath of desire,
I enter you wildly. No waiting, no pause
this time I pound her straight, hard, fast, I'm inhabited,
transcended by your den sliding quickly around me, your buttocks slamming hard against me
One hand on your rump, the other directing
my stake towards your throbbing sheath of desire,
I enter you wildly. No waiting, no pause
this time I pound her straight, hard, fast, I'm inhabited,
transcended by your den sliding quickly around me, your buttocks slamming hard against me
