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Diamond Lies
Tell me it'll be okay
Open your mouth
Let the lies fall out
They sound like diamonds
As they hit the ground
Just close your eyes
It's all I want from you
Hollow verbal comfort
So shinny and sharp
Just lie to me, pretty please
Open your mouth
Let the lies fall out
They sound like diamonds
As they hit the ground
Just close your eyes
It's all I want from you
Hollow verbal comfort
So shinny and sharp
Just lie to me, pretty please
Published 22nd Nov 2022
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22nd Nov 2022 10:05am
23rd Nov 2022 9:35pm
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
23rd Nov 2022 4:05pm
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23rd Nov 2022 9:37pm
Thank you. Sometimes a lie means more than the truth. Rarely but sometimes
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
23rd Nov 2022 9:59pm
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24th Nov 2022 3:03pm
27th Nov 2022 8:28pm
A white lie, at times, can do more good than the truth.
The poem resonates the subject's need for hope. Well done.
The poem resonates the subject's need for hope. Well done.
28th Nov 2022 3:35am
