a Brief fantasy

I know it was a while ago but it was Eve who originally tempted Adam with the forbidden fruit, after first taking a bite.

You're right insofar as that's one version of it.
Other versions give different accounts.
But thanks for the visit & comment both very welcome.

First I wanted to congratulate you. My junior high English teacher was the niece of William Faulkner, the novelist. She stressed being concise with words. So did my dad, who has one of the shortest final papers on record for USC Masters of Social Work. I am more like my mom, so I appreciate you word flow.

There are tole poles or philosophies that are hinted at here. For some there is another path, but that is the subject of many brains more equipped than mine!

Thank you JM for taking the trouble to read my stuff and your mentioning of  " concise work. " That is how I see myself working towards in every piece I produce. (so the remark is pleasing).

As to this " Brief fantasy " I don't have an axe to grind regarding the sexes it's just something which - just got wrote. (like most of mine they just - happen!)

Thanks for visiting & commenting. Rew.