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a point to a view
waking up
looking out for the
window
the disease of
winter grips
my lawn
go to bathroom
gaze into mirror
see a bit of the
monster still
lives in me
head to bedroom
lie down
pull the covers
up tight
sleep
and dream of
humming
bird
summers
Published 16th Nov 2022
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16th Nov 2022 4:06am
hello beautiful Kitty I can relate I see the beast in my own mirror
great write ❤️
great write ❤️
16th Nov 2022 4:13pm
16th Nov 2022 9:32am
Dear BK
Seems, these days especially, dreaming of humming bird summers is the only way to get through the oncoming days. I liked the monster in the mirror metaphor as for me, it gives me hope there’s still some fight left to keep going because I know whatever’s behind curtain number two could be that piece of glory. Loved the reflection in this poem. H🌷
Seems, these days especially, dreaming of humming bird summers is the only way to get through the oncoming days. I liked the monster in the mirror metaphor as for me, it gives me hope there’s still some fight left to keep going because I know whatever’s behind curtain number two could be that piece of glory. Loved the reflection in this poem. H🌷
16th Nov 2022 4:15pm
Thank you, Honoria. Now let's see what's behind door number 2?
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
16th Nov 2022 3:09pm
16th Nov 2022 4:16pm
16th Nov 2022 4:16pm
21st Nov 2022 5:45pm
Sometimes it's better to dream nice and warm than be out in the cold winter.
21st Nov 2022 11:22pm
