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Warring For Love
We warred, we declared a treaty
We kissed afterwards
We made love looking in to each other's eyes
We love
We kissed afterwards
We made love looking in to each other's eyes
We love
Published 15th Nov 2022
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15th Nov 2022 4:58am
I'm diggin' all the We in this. hahaha
You are too clever for your own good buddy:)
But I loved how it only has 4 lines - you are so full of surprises.
You are too clever for your own good buddy:)
But I loved how it only has 4 lines - you are so full of surprises.
15th Nov 2022 5:05am
Yes we usually write the long pieces, a poetess encouraged us to write this, we're uncertain who. but thank you for your support, much appreciation
15th Nov 2022 3:22pm
15th Nov 2022 4:19pm
How can you beat make up sex, it's like nuttin from another planet. Thanks dude
