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restless
sensitivity
covers
her voice
in natural
settings,
leaving
her naked
and vulnerable,
threatening
to uplift
that own
poetic vision,
where
her kind
of beauty
is held
and displayed,
it's all lovely
in the
modern age,
a thriving
force
entangled
within itself,
leaving
the world
restless.
covers
her voice
in natural
settings,
leaving
her naked
and vulnerable,
threatening
to uplift
that own
poetic vision,
where
her kind
of beauty
is held
and displayed,
it's all lovely
in the
modern age,
a thriving
force
entangled
within itself,
leaving
the world
restless.
Published 14th Nov 2022
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14th Nov 2022 11:35am
Dear J,
I enjoyed the insight in this poem. I like how vulnerable one has to be to really express art. It comes from the heart and that’s so fragile. Lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed the insight in this poem. I like how vulnerable one has to be to really express art. It comes from the heart and that’s so fragile. Lovely write. H🌷
14th Nov 2022 12:10pm
14th Nov 2022 10:34pm
The World? Wow, she must be some kind of Goddess! Nicely worded/written, James. :-)
14th Nov 2022 10:39pm
15th Nov 2022 2:25am
Enjoyed how you expressed art as being restless.
All the metaphors you used in building this are
great combinations my friend.
All the metaphors you used in building this are
great combinations my friend.
15th Nov 2022 7:41am
16th Nov 2022 10:15am
Really love this... the short lines parallel the fragility... vulnerability of the one described...
16th Nov 2022 10:18am
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