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Self
"be yourself" they said;
just, not too much, not like that --
the one that fits here.
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Oh whatever, poor me...
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Re. Self
Anonymous
10th Nov 2022 9:26pm
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11th Nov 2022 2:12am
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11th Nov 2022 1:47am
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Re. Self
11th Nov 2022 3:59am
You be you! Someone has to rock the red hair!
Listen toots, I don't fit any group or style or stereotype etc. And I'm happy as hell! For every "average" person, there is one at each end of the extremes. All we really do is figure out which end we lean towards. Lol.
Don't be afraid to stand out. Or be different. Make them know you're there! And don't ever cater to another's whims. Stay true to you. That's what is remembered.
Listen toots, I don't fit any group or style or stereotype etc. And I'm happy as hell! For every "average" person, there is one at each end of the extremes. All we really do is figure out which end we lean towards. Lol.
Don't be afraid to stand out. Or be different. Make them know you're there! And don't ever cater to another's whims. Stay true to you. That's what is remembered.
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Re: Re. Self
11th Nov 2022 1:12pm
Thank you, Styx... of course you're right. No one who knows me would call me a shrinking violet, but I was having a bit of a moment in my head when I wrote this. Sometimes staying true to me is just harder than others.
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Re. Self
Dear K,
All the above times a thousand! You’re the image of perfection in my mind so no changes needed here, there or anywhere. I loved the brevity of this piece. It says everything without fluff. 😘
H🌷
All the above times a thousand! You’re the image of perfection in my mind so no changes needed here, there or anywhere. I loved the brevity of this piece. It says everything without fluff. 😘
H🌷
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Re: Re. Self
11th Nov 2022 10:38pm
Thank you, lovely H. 😊
Here's the same sentiment with more fluff, from a few years ago....
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/290967-institutional/
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Here's the same sentiment with more fluff, from a few years ago....
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/290967-institutional/
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Re: Re. Self
12th Nov 2022 3:29am
You had it going on since the beginning! I loved this one too. Where’s the melody? 😘
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12th Nov 2022 2:11pm
Hmmmm....... 🤔
I hadn't thought of that poem in a while, but it does have a certain rhythm to it, doesn't it?
I hadn't thought of that poem in a while, but it does have a certain rhythm to it, doesn't it?
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- Edited 23rd May 2024 11:45am
12th Nov 2022 00:36am
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Re: Re. Self
12th Nov 2022 3:26am
Thanks, ethan!
I do love those banana sandwiches, though....
Love back atcha
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I do love those banana sandwiches, though....
Love back atcha
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Re. Self
12th Nov 2022 1:54am
I totally get this. It always made me feel yucky
when I would try and fit in - usually at the work place - then
I figured out it was too much work!!.
And at my son's school with all the perfect
stuck up moms who always volunteered cause they didn't have to work.
Sometimes it's easier said then done - but always be yourself:)
And yes I would occasionally volunteer - but I didn't live for it. hahaha
when I would try and fit in - usually at the work place - then
I figured out it was too much work!!.
And at my son's school with all the perfect
stuck up moms who always volunteered cause they didn't have to work.
Sometimes it's easier said then done - but always be yourself:)
And yes I would occasionally volunteer - but I didn't live for it. hahaha
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12th Nov 2022 3:04am
OMG don't get me started on the moms!! They were probably those same popular girls I couldn't relate to in high school. And they're the tiktok moms who know how to do the dances now. NO THANKS.
Thank you for being one of the actual cool ones. I'd hang out with you while volunteering at the middle school dance. 😉
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Thank you for being one of the actual cool ones. I'd hang out with you while volunteering at the middle school dance. 😉
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