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IF I LET YOU GO
Oh how it hurts
to let you go.
To let you leave me
without letting me know.
I try to understand
why you're acting so strange.
I can't begin to tell you
You can't even know.
That person inside me
is on a rampage
tearing down everything
I'm working so hard to attain.
Though its hurting me
I can't let it go on.
So I'll just exit
and pray for your happiness.
I know that I wanted you and
I love you even more.
But that person inside me
says it's time to set you free.
So, IF and WHEN you return
you'll be a better you, I'll be a better me!
to let you go.
To let you leave me
without letting me know.
I try to understand
why you're acting so strange.
I can't begin to tell you
You can't even know.
That person inside me
is on a rampage
tearing down everything
I'm working so hard to attain.
Though its hurting me
I can't let it go on.
So I'll just exit
and pray for your happiness.
I know that I wanted you and
I love you even more.
But that person inside me
says it's time to set you free.
So, IF and WHEN you return
you'll be a better you, I'll be a better me!
Published 8th Nov 2022
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8th Nov 2022 11:31am
Sad drama is a beautiful poem that expresses disappointment in love
Perhaps it is the end of the beginning of a new and happy story
But endings are always painful and need time to recover spiritually and emotionally
I hope you recover quickly from the disappointment
Because the future is in front of you and life is full of hope and love
MP
Perhaps it is the end of the beginning of a new and happy story
But endings are always painful and need time to recover spiritually and emotionally
I hope you recover quickly from the disappointment
Because the future is in front of you and life is full of hope and love
MP
8th Nov 2022 10:25pm
8th Nov 2022 10:32pm
Of course, the only thing that doesn't have a new beginning is death
That is why we must always be optimistic and live the moments of our lives with every desire as if it were the last moment
That is why we must always be optimistic and live the moments of our lives with every desire as if it were the last moment
8th Nov 2022 6:35pm
8th Nov 2022 10:26pm
9th Nov 2022 9:49pm
Wait for his return by all means but move on yourself in the meantime. Why should you lose out, waiting for him? 😊
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