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saturday night
here it is,
a lonely
saturday night,
the rain
is falling
outside,
the sky
shedding
almost
as many tears
as i am
being
without you.
a lonely
saturday night,
the rain
is falling
outside,
the sky
shedding
almost
as many tears
as i am
being
without you.
Published 6th Nov 2022
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6th Nov 2022 5:57am
Dear J,
There is a beauty in this poem in spite of its melancholy. Its appeal lies in its simplicity to say so much in so few words. Beautiful piece. H🌷
There is a beauty in this poem in spite of its melancholy. Its appeal lies in its simplicity to say so much in so few words. Beautiful piece. H🌷
6th Nov 2022 6:00am
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- Edited 8th Dec 2022 2:45pm
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