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Still Living

The ambulance crew, had let me know
My heart had attacked me, it's beat now, was slow
I had no visions, or saw no bright lights
The cardiogenic shock, dealt with my fright
I lay upon the gurney
Awaiting my final journey
A Brasillian was given to me
As i experienced this surreality
And i remember thinking, or so it did seem
It was like i was in Star Wars, and A Midsummer Nights Dream
Then one hour into my op, things went suddenly wrong
As i wondered if this, was to be, my final swan song
My fingers, and toes, turned suddenly to ice
The feeling of creeping death, was not very nice
But the surgeon was quick, and on the ball
And saved me, this was five years ago, i remember it all

by Jemia
missjem56
Written by missjem56 (Jemia de Blondeville)
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