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Rats
you had dreams
of being a heroin queen
but there's no such thing as
bottom feeder chic
oh how cool you thought you were
in your all black gypsy attire
mistakes made
believing you held any faith
time. didn't. heal. shit.
I. still. fucking. hate. you. bitch.
the coffee steams
just like it does on the streets
thats how I felt when you backstabbed me
guess the temptation of the knife
was too great
maybe you thought I was too wreak
and you just might have been right
time. didn't. heal. shit.
I. still. fucking. hate. you. bitch.
you remind me of rats
ones who indulge on dated cheese
just like when you bite on
anyone that is willing to give attention
well I'm prime steak baby
much too harsh for your palate
time. didn't. heal. shit.
I. still. fucking. hate. you. bitch.
I do wonder if you'll ever get the guts
to come knocking back on my door
something you should know first
the house is now occupied by
a big bad wolf
one who doesn't mind devouring
dirty old whores
of being a heroin queen
but there's no such thing as
bottom feeder chic
oh how cool you thought you were
in your all black gypsy attire
mistakes made
believing you held any faith
time. didn't. heal. shit.
I. still. fucking. hate. you. bitch.
the coffee steams
just like it does on the streets
thats how I felt when you backstabbed me
guess the temptation of the knife
was too great
maybe you thought I was too wreak
and you just might have been right
time. didn't. heal. shit.
I. still. fucking. hate. you. bitch.
you remind me of rats
ones who indulge on dated cheese
just like when you bite on
anyone that is willing to give attention
well I'm prime steak baby
much too harsh for your palate
time. didn't. heal. shit.
I. still. fucking. hate. you. bitch.
I do wonder if you'll ever get the guts
to come knocking back on my door
something you should know first
the house is now occupied by
a big bad wolf
one who doesn't mind devouring
dirty old whores
Published 5th Nov 2022
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Anonymous
5th Nov 2022 7:07am
I don't think anybody writes an anger poem better....
I appreciate the purging angst, DC.
My hope is the written release allows for some peace and catharsis.
🌹-B
I appreciate the purging angst, DC.
My hope is the written release allows for some peace and catharsis.
🌹-B
5th Nov 2022 9:10am
Hehe well I always been a fan of diss songs so maybe I got a bit of that in my writing. And yes, it's always about purging for a clearer mind and better days.
I'm all out of candy so let me see what I got... 🍪 cookie?
Many thanks friend 😁
I'm all out of candy so let me see what I got... 🍪 cookie?
Many thanks friend 😁
5th Nov 2022 11:03am
6th Nov 2022 4:04am
Sometimes you got to hit them with the venom. Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
