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Eternity
peel the stone
from your skin
layer by layer
and write me
into your poetry
let every curve
of my body
fill your fingertips
and lust
become your ink
lay me down gently
across these blank pages
and make me yours
for eternity
from your skin
layer by layer
and write me
into your poetry
let every curve
of my body
fill your fingertips
and lust
become your ink
lay me down gently
across these blank pages
and make me yours
for eternity
Published 4th Nov 2022
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4th Nov 2022 3:00pm
Reads as a way to encourage a lover to write a sexy poem for you, to paint you in words.
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- Edited 8th Dec 2022 2:45pm
4th Nov 2022 5:20pm
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4th Nov 2022 6:19pm
4th Nov 2022 7:02pm
5th Nov 2022 10:20am
Dear JC,
Jesus, I need a cigarette and cold shower! Sizzle, crackle and intense heat from this write. I love the passion and the imagery in this. Fabulous piece. H🌷
Jesus, I need a cigarette and cold shower! Sizzle, crackle and intense heat from this write. I love the passion and the imagery in this. Fabulous piece. H🌷
5th Nov 2022 2:56pm
H 😏 good thing I quit many many years ago.
You're so sweet, thank you as always!
I hope you're well, much love ❤
JC
You're so sweet, thank you as always!
I hope you're well, much love ❤
JC
5th Nov 2022 7:22pm
This is a very sensual and vivid piece of writing. Your words float effortlessly into the psyche.
5th Nov 2022 7:48pm
18th Dec 2022 11:48pm
I felt drunk on your words like the finest wine ever. When you speak thusly my manhood rises into a fullness never dreamed of.
Xo
John
Xo
John
