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Impermanence
between
the concrete cracks
a dandelion
survives
it waits patiently
for a subtle wind
in life
&
death
it waits
...we all wait
Published 4th Nov 2022
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4th Nov 2022 5:58am
Dear Z,
Thoughtful reflection and interesting metaphor in this poem. Succinct and meaningful I enjoyed the imagery. Lovely write.
H🌷
Thoughtful reflection and interesting metaphor in this poem. Succinct and meaningful I enjoyed the imagery. Lovely write.
H🌷
7th Nov 2022 00:14am
4th Nov 2022 2:52pm
7th Nov 2022 00:15am
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Dec 2022 2:45pm
7th Nov 2022 00:56am
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