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Totality

your pretty face
my happy smile
your soft kiss
my loving touch
your deep gaze
my heart stops…
 
this devotion of mine you have earned
raised me up when I was broke
showed me that you’re no typical girl
unconditional, just so sweet
innocent and never vindictive
always loved me for me
understanding that I’m not perfect
seeing that I'm better then I show
you defend me with pride
fight for me with no end
making me your true other half
so give me this slow dance we call life
we can hold each other close
my head on yours, and yours on mine
as we sing to each other
 
I will hug you so tight tonight
I will kiss you so lovingly
I will look deep in your eyes  
I will work hard to give you everything
I will buy gifts to see you smile
I will redeem myself when I fail
 
my life with you is speechless
hard to describe such happiness
watching your body move
every movement is erotic
listening to your every word
just brings me in deeper
I can’t help but want to know everything
when it comes to you
 
I don’t need anything else
I don’t want anyone else
so let’s just sleep
it’s been a long time since I rested
was exhausted for so long
I just need to hold you now
let’s lay down
because for once I just want to sleep
and forget about everything else
Written by DevilsChild
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