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PRAYER
MEN OUGHT TO PRAY
AND NOT TO FAINT
IN THE DAY BE UP
IN THE NIGHT AWAKE
ONWARD YOU MARCH ON CHRISTIAN SOLDERS
ADVANCING THE FRONTIERS OF OUR TERRITORY
LOUDER AND LOUDER WE HEAR THE BATTLE CRY OF VICTORY
WHILE YOUR FERVENT PRAYERS RESOUNDING ON
DAILY ON MY KNEES
I WOULD GO
BUILDING UP MY HOLY FAITH
PRAYING ALWAYS IN THE HOLY GHOST
AND NOT TO FAINT
IN THE DAY BE UP
IN THE NIGHT AWAKE
ONWARD YOU MARCH ON CHRISTIAN SOLDERS
ADVANCING THE FRONTIERS OF OUR TERRITORY
LOUDER AND LOUDER WE HEAR THE BATTLE CRY OF VICTORY
WHILE YOUR FERVENT PRAYERS RESOUNDING ON
DAILY ON MY KNEES
I WOULD GO
BUILDING UP MY HOLY FAITH
PRAYING ALWAYS IN THE HOLY GHOST
Published 1st Nov 2022
Author's Note
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2nd Nov 2022 8:03am
AM JUST BEING SINCERE .......... am sorry if that comment I made there in regards to your poem hurts you ,I'm sorry but am being sincere as much as I considered your poem under the lenses oF my experience.....it's potential if what I pointed out is being infused with it .............
I don't know why you had to re post my comment on this particular poem ........." PRAYER " THOSE THINGS I MENTIONED DOES NOT APPLY TO THIS ......YOU SHOULD KNOW OF COURSE THAT THIS POEM IS AN OPEN RELIGIOUS FREE VERSE POEM AND IT DOES NOT FOLLOW THE CONTEMPORARY RULES OF POETRY ,IT HAS NO RHYTHM OR RHYMES, BUT STILL YET IT'S STILL AN ARTISTIC EXPRESSION. ...YOU WOULDN'T NOT EXPECT MUCH FROM IT IN TERM OF LITERARY TOOLS
