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It Never Gets Old
Silently she drops to her knees
(thankful for padded carpet).
She still carries the graceful dancer
from earlier years though it’s more difficult now.
Yes, she’s been here before.
Exactly in this place.
Too many times to count.
She leans into his warmth and thinks,
it never gets old.
(thankful for padded carpet).
She still carries the graceful dancer
from earlier years though it’s more difficult now.
Yes, she’s been here before.
Exactly in this place.
Too many times to count.
She leans into his warmth and thinks,
it never gets old.
Published 30th Oct 2022
| Edited 1st Jul 2023
Author's Note
I wrote this for a friend's wedding anniversary. She danced professionally when she was younger and made one of her dance partners a partner for life (so far).
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30th Oct 2022 9:41pm
A wonderful and very expressive poem
We can read it from the side of love because true love never grows old
And we read it through the picture that the desire and passion never grows old
Thanks for the great meaning
My greetings
MP
We can read it from the side of love because true love never grows old
And we read it through the picture that the desire and passion never grows old
Thanks for the great meaning
My greetings
MP
30th Oct 2022 10:15pm
A minimalist ideal...few words saying much. There's a sexual/erotic component, without gratuitous extras, but it STILL conveys all. It "leaves something" to the reader's imagination, all in all, I think it's an excellent write!
-Ted
-Ted
31st Oct 2022 1:54am
31st Oct 2022 5:50am
8th Nov 2022 3:43pm
Brava, Nazina❣
I enjoy how you let the reader paint the scene in this subtly sensual, titillating piece.
I enjoy how you let the reader paint the scene in this subtly sensual, titillating piece.
