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You Make Me Wild
I wanna look into
those eyes so big
put my hands
on those cans
and give you a licking ,
spread those thighs
so high , whilst I
am kissing them
multiply the flight
that we'd be moving in .
I'd sigh . in dim light
with my fingers , make you wild
add some suction , delight
with a wry , old loving smile ,
then we'd fuck , into the night ,
on your back , in doggy style
you on top , then on your side
oh god good god , you make me wild .
those eyes so big
put my hands
on those cans
and give you a licking ,
spread those thighs
so high , whilst I
am kissing them
multiply the flight
that we'd be moving in .
I'd sigh . in dim light
with my fingers , make you wild
add some suction , delight
with a wry , old loving smile ,
then we'd fuck , into the night ,
on your back , in doggy style
you on top , then on your side
oh god good god , you make me wild .
Published 31st Mar 2012
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31st Mar 2012 2:22am
I like the poem, but would write it slightly different. Not that I am saying there is anything wrong with what you wrote. Hope to read more of your work!
31st Mar 2012 3:36am
yeah you have your way of things like we all do , thanks for commenting , I edited it anyway :)
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31st Mar 2012 3:05am
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31st Mar 2012 3:38am
Anonymous
31st Mar 2012 7:25am
yes, this is written in such a lovely way, i't a great write-as usual luv,<3 as u know how we roll xx peace x ((x))
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1st Apr 2012 7:40am
Although your poem is short you manage to describe with a few words what good sex is all about. I enjoyed it!
1st Apr 2012 2:29pm
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5th Jan 2014 00:26am
those who r born in the Chinese years
of rat and dog
love it doggy style
as u do
lion guy
on your back , in doggy style
you on top , then on your side
oh god good god , you make me wild .
of rat and dog
love it doggy style
as u do
lion guy
on your back , in doggy style
you on top , then on your side
oh god good god , you make me wild .
5th Jan 2014 1:18am
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6th Jan 2014 2:12am
u have toooooooooooo many friends
who love with you to experiment
hence u sex like a lion
daily with a different one
well done
life is full of fun
when u have a woman daily under the sun
just a pun
who love with you to experiment
hence u sex like a lion
daily with a different one
well done
life is full of fun
when u have a woman daily under the sun
just a pun
6th Jan 2014 3:16am
Yeah man
I hear you
multiple's the plan
to adhere to
there's a few
I have
so life's pretty cool
every summer
on the sand
I keep it true .
I hear you
multiple's the plan
to adhere to
there's a few
I have
so life's pretty cool
every summer
on the sand
I keep it true .
6th Jan 2014 4:06am
GREAT just great...
keep them under you
as the sun does you
stay cool
let them drink ur cum
as you too help with theirs sum
and drink it cool
we all know
sex is nothing to fool
keep them under you
as the sun does you
stay cool
let them drink ur cum
as you too help with theirs sum
and drink it cool
we all know
sex is nothing to fool
