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Fanciful
You were another molecule to gamble,
another wager with chemistry
kicking around in my oil system,
these gutsy remains are what's left of me
in the darkness
and I won't fear
the fourth hour shivers.
I am just another pebble in a mindless sea.
I wasted time trying to build a tree from the soil
I am no seed.
Treasure our moments,
Evangeline
and know the stars will shine again
under DJ decks.
I haven't strength for the drink
scene.
Choose someone who has lived longer than I.
another wager with chemistry
kicking around in my oil system,
these gutsy remains are what's left of me
in the darkness
and I won't fear
the fourth hour shivers.
I am just another pebble in a mindless sea.
I wasted time trying to build a tree from the soil
I am no seed.
Treasure our moments,
Evangeline
and know the stars will shine again
under DJ decks.
I haven't strength for the drink
scene.
Choose someone who has lived longer than I.
Published 30th Mar 2012
| Edited 31st Mar 2012
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4th Apr 2012 1:10pm
LA
At times I see daubs of surrealism
in your poetry as a reader. And this
was one of those.
May be it's just me. But I love
these writes. To the core.
'I am just another pebble in a mindless sea.
I wasted time trying to build a tree from the soil
I am no seed.'
and
'know the stars will shine again
under DJ decks.'
Just one thing:
'I haven't strength for the drink
scene. '
I was not very sure of this line.
p.s-If I have to try to put it in a
coherent way it would be something like
this:
(A mix of a Pink Floyd+Tangerine Dream
concert + Music video of 'Soul meets Body'
+ scenes from 'Anima Mundi' + Fluid world
of Gasper Noe, W. S Burroughs and last but
not the least L.A herself.)
Nobody asked. But I felt this urge.
Beauty thrills. Enthralls. It did.
At times I see daubs of surrealism
in your poetry as a reader. And this
was one of those.
May be it's just me. But I love
these writes. To the core.
'I am just another pebble in a mindless sea.
I wasted time trying to build a tree from the soil
I am no seed.'
and
'know the stars will shine again
under DJ decks.'
Just one thing:
'I haven't strength for the drink
scene. '
I was not very sure of this line.
p.s-If I have to try to put it in a
coherent way it would be something like
this:
(A mix of a Pink Floyd+Tangerine Dream
concert + Music video of 'Soul meets Body'
+ scenes from 'Anima Mundi' + Fluid world
of Gasper Noe, W. S Burroughs and last but
not the least L.A herself.)
Nobody asked. But I felt this urge.
Beauty thrills. Enthralls. It did.
4th Apr 2012 5:10pm
