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Date with the Devil
Carving mysterious runes with bone
a pentagram etched into my skin
Pulling on the bleeding sinews
of Desperately unrestrained sins
With Malady of pestilent mists
and lace of midnight moonbeams
in the suffocation of crimson depths
The reflections of waning and pale,
I am cloudy and defiled as I drown.
Wormwood wind with a funeral song
calls me to the beautiful dead
To join in the pool of blood-red
near is littered with vanda's last breath,
Lilac orchid joyless and empty
Moaning a song of intense suffering
In this autumn and nondescript night,
this dark guest that appeared to me
And drenched with his gloomy nectar,
he put the 'T'horny phallus inside me
my body shaking in a bloody orgasm
as the fluid of my essence pours out
And sweet predatory kisses given,
like graves evil spells cast,
Interrupted the horror of separation.
The Devil consuming my body and soul
once taken there is no escape from hell
I crave you, this painful slow death.
a pentagram etched into my skin
Pulling on the bleeding sinews
of Desperately unrestrained sins
With Malady of pestilent mists
and lace of midnight moonbeams
in the suffocation of crimson depths
The reflections of waning and pale,
I am cloudy and defiled as I drown.
Wormwood wind with a funeral song
calls me to the beautiful dead
To join in the pool of blood-red
near is littered with vanda's last breath,
Lilac orchid joyless and empty
Moaning a song of intense suffering
In this autumn and nondescript night,
this dark guest that appeared to me
And drenched with his gloomy nectar,
he put the 'T'horny phallus inside me
my body shaking in a bloody orgasm
as the fluid of my essence pours out
And sweet predatory kisses given,
like graves evil spells cast,
Interrupted the horror of separation.
The Devil consuming my body and soul
once taken there is no escape from hell
I crave you, this painful slow death.
Author's Note
One of my favorite times of year. Love all things spooky and of course sexy too. ;) Can't believe it's already the 19th. I have missed you guys. I know I have missed so many awesome spooky things but I am trying to get back to it.
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Re. Date with the Devil
19th Oct 2022 7:48pm
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19th Oct 2022 9:20pm
Dark, alluring, and sexy rolled up into one like me Tim. :p Oh the dark things that go through my mind would no doubt get me put away. Then I would roam the halls of the insane asylum forever looking for 't'horny phallus to play with. ;) And I do love incredible, thanks for being the first Devil to come by for a date. ;)
Re. Date with the Devil
19th Oct 2022 7:59pm
Dark and erotic, with this combination you just can't go wrong. We love the darkness, it holds it's own beauty from the unseen anticipation to the silent screams. Yes this is really tight Lady
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19th Oct 2022 9:20pm
Totally agree, dark and erotic is a combination I know so well. ;) I know you love the darkness too and so it makes me really happy that you found your way over into my darkness. It is indeed beautiful and captivating, you know how much we agree on that and the anticipation of screams is always exciting... Oh the dark thrills to be had. I love keeping it really tight. ;)
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
19th Oct 2022 9:21pm
Well I just love giving you ideas Relic, you know that. A long lost scroll from the eighteen-hundreds hidden in a castle wall is definitely something I want to read. Especially one written long ago detailing the life of female vampire. I can certainly see myself having lived in a castle and keeping a diary of all of my dark desires as I hunted for blood in the night.
Re. Date with the Devil
19th Oct 2022 8:14pm
Dark, spooky and sexy, awesome write gorgeous a great Halloween spin
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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19th Oct 2022 9:33pm
Halloween, dark, spooky, and sexy is my catnip. ;) And I can tell you love it too, but of course I already knew that. Because I know everything. lol Always inviting you into the gorgeous darkness, because the light always desires the darkness. To be taken in each and every room of the haunted house. And everywhere else too.
Re. Date with the Devil
19th Oct 2022 8:27pm
fantasy poem,
I loved your description of life's problems in this poem
Despite the problem that surrounds us, we searched for whimsy, even with ghosts and devil
Greetings to you Kristina
MP
I loved your description of life's problems in this poem
Despite the problem that surrounds us, we searched for whimsy, even with ghosts and devil
Greetings to you Kristina
MP
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
19th Oct 2022 9:35pm
Definitely MP there is actually quite a lot contained within about life's problems so I am glad you could see that. Everything I write generally has many meanings. In this case I did however want to convey a sense of whimsy about my excitement for Halloween, and all things spooky along with my passion for all things 'darkly' erotic mixed in too. ;)
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19th Oct 2022 9:52pm
I understand your writing very well
i live with your poem in my mind
As if I'm playing a part in your poem
Your poem really pushes its reader to imagine himself living a role in it
i live with your poem in my mind
As if I'm playing a part in your poem
Your poem really pushes its reader to imagine himself living a role in it
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
19th Oct 2022 11:12pm
I love it when people understand my writing. When you can see many of the meanings that are below the surface. Feeling yourself as a part of it and taking part in it is something I love the most. I always want the reader to feel me and take part with me.
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
19th Oct 2022 11:52pm
So much trouble, I guess that's why I am always in trouble. :p
You better love it damnit! lol
Darkness and erotica is what Halloween is all about to me, and life too apparently. :p And yes a lot of real life in this but let's stick to the darkly erotic and Halloween parts. ;) A Halloween classic, ooooo I love that.
Just don't drown, I kind of like having you around. Although I am sure I could raise you from the dead because that's just how determined I am. Dark layers, oh yes I baked many layers into this spooky cake so that you would hold your breath from beginning to end.
Sexy horror stories, now that's something I can sink my teeth into. Well that and lots of other stuff. ;) Get me too excited and you might just find out. lol Pulling the reader into me is something I love. :p
It's definitely been a difficult time lately so I am really happy to be back sharing some writing. It feels like it's been forever. I really appreciate you guys not forgetting about me. ;)
You better love it damnit! lol
Darkness and erotica is what Halloween is all about to me, and life too apparently. :p And yes a lot of real life in this but let's stick to the darkly erotic and Halloween parts. ;) A Halloween classic, ooooo I love that.
Just don't drown, I kind of like having you around. Although I am sure I could raise you from the dead because that's just how determined I am. Dark layers, oh yes I baked many layers into this spooky cake so that you would hold your breath from beginning to end.
Sexy horror stories, now that's something I can sink my teeth into. Well that and lots of other stuff. ;) Get me too excited and you might just find out. lol Pulling the reader into me is something I love. :p
It's definitely been a difficult time lately so I am really happy to be back sharing some writing. It feels like it's been forever. I really appreciate you guys not forgetting about me. ;)
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The woman in the picture is hot. Wish you were my sexy devil for Halloween.😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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20th Oct 2022 1:34pm
Hey Francisco, sexy devil is a classic for sure. Always naughty and beautiful and ready to cause trouble on Halloween or any other day too. I imagine you could make a good Devil as well. :p Telling all the sexy demons what to do right? lol And yeah, the woman is hot and looks like she is ready for her date with the Devil. That look is like she knows what's coming, so to speak. :p
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20th Oct 2022 2:35pm
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20th Oct 2022 2:44pm
Halloween is just such a naughty holiday, but then so is all of the others to me as well. lol Like Christmas, the best thing to unwrap on Christmas is the person you are with if you ask me. :p
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Hell yes I'll unwrap you very slowly and take my time for we have all time in the world.
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Re. Date with the Devil
20th Oct 2022 1:10pm
“I can dream up schemes when I'm sitting in my seat
I don't see any flaws 'til I get to my feet
I wish I never woke up this morning
Life was easy when it was boring”
Darkness, written by Stewart Copeland, recorded by the Police
I don't see any flaws 'til I get to my feet
I wish I never woke up this morning
Life was easy when it was boring”
Darkness, written by Stewart Copeland, recorded by the Police
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
20th Oct 2022 1:41pm
Well that is certainly very meaningful Jazz. I can definitely see the darkness in it. It is easy to dream while sitting or laying still but sometimes getting to your feet is when the nightmares start. Sometimes you wake up to some very difficult things. Boring is definitely not good for me, but boring certainly is much easier in a lot of cases. Being less perceptive and analytical would be as well. Thanks for sharing that, I had never seen it before. You are so full of interesting things.
Re. Date with the Devil
20th Oct 2022 1:30pm
Hits me in the pit of my stomach
Another one of your creepy poems you do so well
I'm left with awe at your capability to create an outsider feeling of not belonging. But somehow that feels right
How do you do that ???
Another one of your creepy poems you do so well
I'm left with awe at your capability to create an outsider feeling of not belonging. But somehow that feels right
How do you do that ???
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
20th Oct 2022 2:00pm
I can punch you in the stomach pretty good. Oh yeah! creepy is something I know all to well. And all kinds of creepy things lurk in my mind. Things that would tie you up and torture you until you like it. And then torture you some more. Pull you into the darkness and make it the only home you ever knew. Perhaps I need company there. I wrote something recently about the haunted mind. Ah, and I feel like I never belonged for many reasons... Some endogenous and some exogenous. I am very good at pulling someone into my heaven or hell. I suppose I just need company there and people always want to join me. Perhaps they don't know what they are in for...
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20th Oct 2022 2:20pm
Your Heaven and Your Hell are good to go.
Wouldn't have it any other way.
A punch to the gut us is a wake up call.
Need your company in the ether....
Wouldn't have it any other way.
A punch to the gut us is a wake up call.
Need your company in the ether....
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
20th Oct 2022 2:34pm
I "have such sights to show you" - yes, it's a Hellraiser quote. :p You might remember it, like when the hooks on the chains tear the guys skin off. Oh yeah! love it. I think I was playing with the Lament Configuration (the puzzle box from Hellraiser) at a young age and maybe that set the tone for things to come. Some things you just shouldn't play with. I have heard the new one is good but the sequels were all rubbish so we shall see. Ah, I do love knowing someone needs my company in the ether. ;)
Re. Date with the Devil
20th Oct 2022 6:37pm
To be honest, Halloween creeps me out, but oh, sister!! This poem is on fire. So sexy all alluring. Makes the darkness a bit more…adaptable. I’m able to go to the dangerous places with you, and the excitement and anticipation are such a turn on. You always bring us into your world and I love that.
Excellent write.
Excellent write.
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
20th Oct 2022 8:14pm
Hey Mary, I can't imagine anyone better to have in the fire with me. ;) I might creep you out but I will make it all better, promise. And you are sexy and alluring too, I always love seeing you and this comment really made me smile. The dangerous places and the darkness are definitely incredibly thrilling and exciting, at least for me. The anticipation that anything can and will happen there is definitely an incredible turn on. Oh yes, the bondage and torture of the mind and body, mine, yours, his, everyone's. ;) I love bringing you into my world. Definitely been struggling as of late, so I need any distractions from that. I know all the best ones. Really love that you stopped by so much...
Re. Date with the Devil
20th Oct 2022 7:29pm
Hi Kristina,
So happy you found time to post on Halloween. Such great inspiration for your
talents. Erotic and dark- suits you well lovely:) It is all great but I loved your closing
stanza. The pull and allure of a predatory kiss. How it can take you down - and that
it's just fine with me. hahaha
Yes - I love a good kiss. LOL
So happy to see you in your element - shines like a black diamond amiga:)
So happy you found time to post on Halloween. Such great inspiration for your
talents. Erotic and dark- suits you well lovely:) It is all great but I loved your closing
stanza. The pull and allure of a predatory kiss. How it can take you down - and that
it's just fine with me. hahaha
Yes - I love a good kiss. LOL
So happy to see you in your element - shines like a black diamond amiga:)
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20th Oct 2022 8:16pm
I feel bad I have not posted more for Halloween but hopefully more to come soon. ;) I love Halloween but I am sure you know that. lol It is definitely a great inspiration. Like 'Drag me to hell' I will pull you down into my Erotic and dark world Adel. (but I won't keep throwing up in your face, yeah you know the movie I mean right?) Okay, no idea why I thought of that, it doesn't really fit at all. lol I know you are a great kisser, can see it in your eyes. And I think oh yeah, I could definitely make out with her and that would get everyone all hot and bothered for sure but not as much as me. :p Okay, too much I know. Very much my element. ;) And I have always wanted a black diamond. How beautiful... I must admit I do have an Black obsidian mirror. Shhhhh...
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Am I too late for this dirt dance with the devil ??
Leave it to you to inflame and mame
Digging the eerie feel
Creepy
Last line brings it home but the whole write is transcending ….
BIG LIKE
Leave it to you to inflame and mame
Digging the eerie feel
Creepy
Last line brings it home but the whole write is transcending ….
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
20th Oct 2022 8:27pm
Never too late for a dirty dance with me. The Devil will have to wait his turn, he has had plenty so far. I love getting lost in the music, maybe some underground grungy techno club where you can get away with so much more. Lifting my skirt on the dance floor, grinding hips and ass back against hard and throbbing 'music' lol Oh yeah... Practically having sex on the dance floor. Perhaps even fluids are involved because they can't be restrained. Oh yeah, sorry back to eerie and creepy. lol Back to the dungeon for some bondage and pain... Ah, what a night...
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
20th Oct 2022 8:53pm
I think that's why we understand each other so well Jay. Often chasing the thrill of a near death. Even dying, only to be resurrected over and over... I know the Devil won't have us, we are far too valuable to him on Earth right? So often the more you crave something the more elusive it is. Slow and painful can produce some of the most intense sensations though. Put on a blindfold, bind the hands, and well... Okay, you know what I mean. :p * nevermind, naughty look * I suppose one sentence can produce so many thoughts. ;)
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20th Oct 2022 9:05pm
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20th Oct 2022 9:15pm
Somehow a date with the Devil always works out in the end. ;) He plows you with red wine. lol And I love red wine... Cabernet, Rioja, Merlot, Malbec... I hate sweet wines and white is tolerable... But alas, give a good red to sip on. A nice big red glass to take into my mouth. * nevermind, innocent look * I guess I am just saying the date went very well in the end. lol And yes I had plenty of red... :p
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20th Oct 2022 9:19pm
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Damn, I forgot Shiraz lol I love Shiraz... especially one with some spice to it. I have to admit Rioja is better though in general. ;) Bold but wet :p... it's a great combination... (most bold reds are dry)
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20th Oct 2022 9:33pm
Well... You were always a little bit spicy, lol but Billy's here to bring you back down to earth! I would cuddle you in my stripey Pyjamas! 🤣
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20th Oct 2022 9:48pm
Very spicy, wet and bold... Even better than Shiraz or Rioja. :p Don't bring me down to earth, why would you want to do that? So mean... But stripey pajamas are a classic, so cute...
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Re: Re. Date with the Devil
21st Oct 2022 7:24pm
Hey my dear Ted, yes always many topics in play and very much inspired. The dark and erotic come together so easily as I write and in every other way as well. I felt like this one was different and perhaps more 'poetic' in a Gothic dark way that I love. But I do love Halloween and oh the cold has finally started to really set in. I made it through summer at least even though I was consumed in flames as always. ;) I love a good key lime pie and mango lassi year round though. :p Along with a neck to bite...
Re. Date with the Devil
21st Oct 2022 8:42pm
How's your 'hot date' with the devil going, KristinaX?! Just checking up on you, you understand? ;-)
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21st Oct 2022 9:20pm
Well a date with the Devil is always very hot. It definitely burns you inside and out. But even the Devil has a hard time handling my intense passion. That's why he leaves me on earth to keep catching things on fire, spreading pleasure and pain. Redefining sin. Of course I really appreciate you checking to see how things are going... And stripey pajamas are always great but a long V neck T-shirt will do, or nothing at all. No need to get all fancy. lol
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21st Oct 2022 9:23pm
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Everyone loves wine. ;) Might have to grab some for the weekend... God knows I need it.
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21st Oct 2022 9:46pm
What I meant by that is that I'm on my way. I'm practically running to you now, lol. Do you need any milk? See, I can be boringly geekily practical even on a hot date with the devil (you), a nice devil though, I'm sure, lol. I'm just chatting, well, you know... (swear word here).
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21st Oct 2022 9:56pm
Oh boy! well milk is always good, grass fed non-homogenized low temperature pasteurized (or not at all). I like the good stuff with heavy cream on top. lol But hey you have tons of dairy over there. I remember, they even still brought it around in those glass bottles and left it at the door in places. That hasn't happened over here in forever. :p
Shhhh.... you were not supposed to tell that I am the Devil on this date damnit. * innocent look * I do know, but I wonder what swear word now...
Shhhh.... you were not supposed to tell that I am the Devil on this date damnit. * innocent look * I do know, but I wonder what swear word now...
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Is there going to be anything left for me after all these dates with these so called Devil's?? You'll note my cone is Hot Devil RED and white appearing smooth it has ultra textured weight to satisfy your luxurious sizzling aura fountain.....
You know where to find me ..
You know where to find me ..
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21st Oct 2022 10:29pm
Not to worry, there is always more; so much more... oh this insatiable need and intense passion just never stops. So many Devils, so little time. That cone is pretty long from the looks of it. And yeah, red but I wouldn't call that Hot Devil RED. Just Saying... ultra textured weights sounds like some new condom commercial or something. To satisfy your luxurious sizzling aura fountain, yeah that's good marketing for sure. Who doesn't like satisfaction especially the kind that... * nevermind, innocent look * On the road, I take it... Making all kinds of noise.
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21st Oct 2022 10:40pm
I'll bet you're noisy
Starting off all shy, little girlish sounds, working your throttle a little deeper and getting louder but the neighbors are just starting to stir.
Then full speed ahead with monumental bursts of carbon burn. Now the whole neighborhood is awake and angling for the best view.
I'm lucky, I've been here before. This road has a lot of traffic but we're speeding for the edge for a fiery cataclysmic finale breaking the speed of sound. I've been there and I LOVE IT ❤
Starting off all shy, little girlish sounds, working your throttle a little deeper and getting louder but the neighbors are just starting to stir.
Then full speed ahead with monumental bursts of carbon burn. Now the whole neighborhood is awake and angling for the best view.
I'm lucky, I've been here before. This road has a lot of traffic but we're speeding for the edge for a fiery cataclysmic finale breaking the speed of sound. I've been there and I LOVE IT ❤
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21st Oct 2022 10:52pm
Oh yeah, so noisy.
Coy really gets the motor revved up always doesn't it? and little girlish sounds. lol Funny, I just mentioned disturbing the neighbors in another one I wrote. Because yeah, the more you work the throttle the louder I can get. Like any good performance sleek sports car. The kind that makes you shake, I mean makes the road shake. lol You just want to run your hands all over the sleek curves. ;) The whole neighborhood will definitely be looking but that's part of the fun. Listening to that motor purr... And that premium sound system. My road is selective about what traffic goes there though. :p The speed of sound, supersonic, hypersonic, and everything else too. I LOVE IT. ;)
Coy really gets the motor revved up always doesn't it? and little girlish sounds. lol Funny, I just mentioned disturbing the neighbors in another one I wrote. Because yeah, the more you work the throttle the louder I can get. Like any good performance sleek sports car. The kind that makes you shake, I mean makes the road shake. lol You just want to run your hands all over the sleek curves. ;) The whole neighborhood will definitely be looking but that's part of the fun. Listening to that motor purr... And that premium sound system. My road is selective about what traffic goes there though. :p The speed of sound, supersonic, hypersonic, and everything else too. I LOVE IT. ;)
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25th Oct 2022 2:34am
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25th Oct 2022 5:58pm
Hey Adagio, I am really glad you read and liked this one. I feel like it is in a style you can really appreciate. Especially the gothic elements and the darkness, as well as the erotic ones. I do love writing in different ways. And Halloween is definitely one of my favorite times of year. I hope you are enjoying it and ready to scare some people. ;)
Re. Date with the Devil
7th Nov 2022 1:06am
A great combination of dark, evil and erotica. You really conjured great images, raw and wild, vivid and colorful, involving all the senses, letting the reader imagine you in those states of horror and bliss.
Yes, it's a great season to explore the darker side of things, and adding the titillating aspect makes for a great read.
Hope you had a great holiday.
Amazing work Kristina, as always.
Yes, it's a great season to explore the darker side of things, and adding the titillating aspect makes for a great read.
Hope you had a great holiday.
Amazing work Kristina, as always.
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7th Nov 2022 2:31pm
Dark, evil, and erotica is a combination I know well Wally. Conjuring images with all my raw and wild spells, casing you in vivid and colorful imagery involving all the senses. Ah, the imagine me in those states of horror and bliss is definitely something to see. And definitely the season to be able to share the darkness even more and show just how seductive it can be despite the pain. Titillating indeed, and pain is an intense sensation that so often goes hand in hand with pleasure leading you into the dark. Halloween was great, did a lot of stuff over the weekend and on Monday. I love Halloween! I hope you had a great one too Wally. And thank you so much for the incredible compliment. I always want to give you something amazing to read. ;)