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The Candle Still Burns
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The Candle Still Burns
He told her magic wasn't real.
She laughed.
He has been under her spell for years.
Written by
nikkimoe
Published
16th Oct 2022
| Edited
4th Dec 2022
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16th Oct 2022 4:17pm
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Re: Re. The Candle Still Burns
nikkimoe
16th Oct 2022 7:23pm
Thank you. 😁
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Re. The Candle Still Burns
Eerie
16th Oct 2022 7:41pm
Love this. If that magic is there, it’s there.
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Re. The Candle Still Burns
Honoria
16th Oct 2022 8:54pm
Dear N,
Fantastic! I always get a chuckle when I hear people say they don’t believe in magic. Your poem is So well said I can’t comment on this perfection.
H🌷
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Re. The Candle Still Burns
Adelphina
17th Oct 2022 2:07am
Love this! hahahaha
True magic is unrecognizable - don't know it's there.
Great write!!
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Re. The Candle Still Burns
wallyroo92
6th Nov 2022 10:34pm
Those little love spells can go undetected for decades.
Nice spill
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