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Contented
it's not often the sun rises to clear blue skies
bringing smiles and vision to clouded eyes
to see a beginning and not to be begging
of what is, not was
blurred in a vision
I see past what I fear
the beauty, the wit
listening to whispers
suddenly appeared
the sun rises and I shine
alone in her presence
contented
in what I might find
bringing smiles and vision to clouded eyes
to see a beginning and not to be begging
of what is, not was
blurred in a vision
I see past what I fear
the beauty, the wit
listening to whispers
suddenly appeared
the sun rises and I shine
alone in her presence
contented
in what I might find
Published 15th Oct 2022
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15th Oct 2022 6:23pm
15th Oct 2022 9:40pm
16th Oct 2022 00:19am
Love this Tim:)
Just what I needed to read today.
Being content with possibilities.
Great write:)
Just what I needed to read today.
Being content with possibilities.
Great write:)
16th Oct 2022 5:46pm
16th Oct 2022 6:43pm
This is good! Like I've said before, I like how the rhymes fall as they may. Strict structure is wonderful and all that. But, we as writers also have to step out of the box of conformity. That's growth.
Your enthusiastic message within this is also very rewarding to read. It makes the reader appreciate the most basic of needs, sunshine. Even figuratively.
Great write!
Your enthusiastic message within this is also very rewarding to read. It makes the reader appreciate the most basic of needs, sunshine. Even figuratively.
Great write!
16th Oct 2022 7:24pm
Anonymous
21st Oct 2022 1:50pm
Send some of that kind of sunshine this way please - she sounds pretty okay ;)
I always see better without my naked eye, just gotta remind myself often...
I always see better without my naked eye, just gotta remind myself often...
21st Oct 2022 3:04pm
