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Watching Young Lovers
Voyeur
Secret Garden
In the darkness
Watching young lovers
Pristine silence
Broken by grunts
Human condition
Saving the damn day
Secret Garden
In the darkness
Watching young lovers
Pristine silence
Broken by grunts
Human condition
Saving the damn day
Author's Note
Watercolor Painting by Poetspeak
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14th Oct 2022 3:07pm
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Re: Re. Watching Young Lovers
14th Oct 2022 3:14pm
I really like writing this way
Value poems
Bang for the buck if you will ..
Thx Ted
Value poems
Bang for the buck if you will ..
Thx Ted
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- Edited 19th Jul 2023 3:46am
14th Oct 2022 3:57pm
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Re: Re. Watching Young Lovers
14th Oct 2022 4:50pm
Re. Watching Young Lovers
14th Oct 2022 5:37pm
Dear PS,
The pairing of the painting works wonderfully with the poem. It shouts refreshing, young, vibrant, hopeful and every other young thing 😊
Young couples are very sweet to watch. It sometimes brings back long forgotten behaviors when relationships are in a rut.
Big Dig! H🌷
The pairing of the painting works wonderfully with the poem. It shouts refreshing, young, vibrant, hopeful and every other young thing 😊
Young couples are very sweet to watch. It sometimes brings back long forgotten behaviors when relationships are in a rut.
Big Dig! H🌷
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Re: Re. Watching Young Lovers
14th Oct 2022 6:04pm
Dear H,
Agree with all you said !!
I thought the painting paired well
Many thanks 😊
Agree with all you said !!
I thought the painting paired well
Many thanks 😊
Re. Watching Young Lovers
15th Oct 2022 1:51am
Re. Watching Young Lovers
15th Oct 2022 8:35pm
Yes, that energy saves the day, even if it's only through memories and voyeurism. Lovely innocent art, with just the right sprinkling of black.
❤️k
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Re: Re. Watching Young Lovers
15th Oct 2022 9:00pm
Kinda fun going unnoticed while lovers get it on ..
Hey, maybe learn something
Wanna hear me grunt ?
Thx Red
❤️
Hey, maybe learn something
Wanna hear me grunt ?
Thx Red
❤️
Re. Watching Young Lovers
17th Oct 2022 6:00pm
Re: Re. Watching Young Lovers
17th Oct 2022 9:47pm
Re. Watching Young Lovers
6th Nov 2022 1:35am
Gotta like the naughtiness to this. The colors add something nice to it as well.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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Re: Re. Watching Young Lovers
6th Nov 2022 1:49am
Love the Grunts
It’s the way love should be made
Video on demand Wally
Thx Bro
It’s the way love should be made
Video on demand Wally
Thx Bro