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Neighbor Girl
Published 13th Oct 2022
Author's Note
Seeing a lady in our neighborhood caused a strong emotional response in me.
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13th Oct 2022 9:16pm
Anonymous
13th Oct 2022 9:52pm
I remember being this girl..... Oh, those were the days!
Lovely little nostalgic moment, remembered
💙-it
xo
Lovely little nostalgic moment, remembered
💙-it
xo
14th Oct 2022 4:42am
Glad I stimulated a pleasant memory. I can picture you running through the sprinkler.
14th Oct 2022 1:27am
Dear LV,
Dang! Now I can’t be this girl if it was already Bluevelvete! Totally can’t compete with that. 😉
I can relate to the topic only for me it was this gentleman living on the next street. I did a lot of walking…until he moved 😏
Very relatable write with just enough said. Great piece. H🌷
Dang! Now I can’t be this girl if it was already Bluevelvete! Totally can’t compete with that. 😉
I can relate to the topic only for me it was this gentleman living on the next street. I did a lot of walking…until he moved 😏
Very relatable write with just enough said. Great piece. H🌷
14th Oct 2022 4:41am
Thank you for the nice comment. You can still run through the sprinkler. Glad you could relate to this.
