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If You Don't Believe Me
Do you think I’m cowardly,
For not wanting to fight any more?
Do you think I’m gutless,
For avoiding the anguishing shame I can’t ignore?
Tell me and look me in the eye.
I’ll show you the pain if you don’t believe me.
Do you think I’m fainthearted,
For hoping for the best for those around me?
Do you think I’m spineless,
For having a menacing fear of everything I see?
Tell me when you see the control die.
I’ll show you the agony if you don’t believe me.
Do you think I’m wrong,
For being weak and unable to cope with this doubt?
Do you think I’m pathetic,
For hating how my life plays out?
Tell me when you see me cry.
I’ll show you the sorrow if you don’t believe me.
Do you think I’m pitiful,
For not wanting the sore battles in my mind?
Do you think I’m contemptible,
For leaving my loved ones behind?
Tell me as you say goodbye.
I’ll show you the torture if you don’t believe me.
Do you think it’s fair, that even with the entire struggle,
You choose to judge me and think less of me?
For not wanting to fight any more?
Do you think I’m gutless,
For avoiding the anguishing shame I can’t ignore?
Tell me and look me in the eye.
I’ll show you the pain if you don’t believe me.
Do you think I’m fainthearted,
For hoping for the best for those around me?
Do you think I’m spineless,
For having a menacing fear of everything I see?
Tell me when you see the control die.
I’ll show you the agony if you don’t believe me.
Do you think I’m wrong,
For being weak and unable to cope with this doubt?
Do you think I’m pathetic,
For hating how my life plays out?
Tell me when you see me cry.
I’ll show you the sorrow if you don’t believe me.
Do you think I’m pitiful,
For not wanting the sore battles in my mind?
Do you think I’m contemptible,
For leaving my loved ones behind?
Tell me as you say goodbye.
I’ll show you the torture if you don’t believe me.
Do you think it’s fair, that even with the entire struggle,
You choose to judge me and think less of me?
Published 29th Mar 2012
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29th Mar 2012 8:07pm
Hey You..
Three now :o)
I loved it..
In fact I'm off to read it again..
Not very constructive..
But hey thats me :o)
Loved it :o0
Three now :o)
I loved it..
In fact I'm off to read it again..
Not very constructive..
But hey thats me :o)
Loved it :o0
29th Mar 2012 10:16pm
Thank you my dear!!!!!!! N thanx for adding it to your reading list!!!!!!!!!!!
29th Mar 2012 8:35pm
I get from what you have written you have a lot of guts and strength..beautiful..peace Crim :)
29th Mar 2012 10:16pm
Thank you, it makes a change people thinking that about a subject such as that!!!!!!!!!!!
30th Mar 2012 6:18pm
30th Mar 2012 6:37pm
31st Mar 2012 5:19am
mrs angel
you know, this write you have done is by far the best so far.
your presentation is good as is the fact that you have switched your rhyme scheme.
I look forward to reading more like this.
shine on !
you know, this write you have done is by far the best so far.
your presentation is good as is the fact that you have switched your rhyme scheme.
I look forward to reading more like this.
shine on !
31st Mar 2012 5:36am
well thank you very much eamon!!!!!!!!!!! It was actually reading through the forum thread again that made me want to write it lmao!!!!!!!!!!
31st Mar 2012 4:26pm
this is an epic poem ,i taught aswell that you inspiration cam from one of the froums, but still pretty fucking brilliant nicely done Angel i enjoyed reading through this
TLIFD
TLIFD
31st Mar 2012 4:33pm
Aww thank yo- it's all real feelings, it was just seeing how many people genuinely thought bad and judged people dealing with these sorta emotions that made me start it lol!!!!!!!!
