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a need to remember
secret winds,
soft voices
remembered
between
each breath,
restless depths
afraid
of crowded
streets,
abandoned
in shadows,
my loneliness
is everything,
soft voices
remembered
between
each breath,
restless depths
afraid
of crowded
streets,
abandoned
in shadows,
my loneliness
is everything,
Published 11th Oct 2022
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11th Oct 2022 11:29am
11th Oct 2022 11:31am
11th Oct 2022 4:00pm
Dear J,
This embodies a lot of us, I think. It’s achingly beautiful and lonely.
I really like the flow and the length is perfect. Direct. It’s such a lovely write despite its subject. H🌷
This embodies a lot of us, I think. It’s achingly beautiful and lonely.
I really like the flow and the length is perfect. Direct. It’s such a lovely write despite its subject. H🌷
11th Oct 2022 5:11pm
15th Oct 2022 4:43am
No questions...Straight to the point, with deep meaning expressed..I truly LIKE!!!!
15th Oct 2022 5:12am
