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Never To Rise
The devil will never rise
He wont see Gods skies
He'll never see Gods shing face
He possesses not an angels grace.
He wont see Gods skies
He'll never see Gods shing face
He possesses not an angels grace.
Published 10th Oct 2022
Author's Note
I wrote this about 12 years ago. Never knowing a poem could only be 4 lines long.
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10th Oct 2022 5:03am
Dear G,
Very thoughtful piece. You carve out a very visual write with graceful brevity. I enjoyed your authors note as well. I didn’t know a poem could be so brief either unless it was a haiku, until I started reading about certain styles after joining the site. Always something new to learn. Wonderful write. H🌷
Very thoughtful piece. You carve out a very visual write with graceful brevity. I enjoyed your authors note as well. I didn’t know a poem could be so brief either unless it was a haiku, until I started reading about certain styles after joining the site. Always something new to learn. Wonderful write. H🌷
10th Oct 2022 10:07am
Thank you. I hands know either. DeathRattle89 has a great 4 line poem so I decided to try.
10th Oct 2022 5:15am
I usually prefer a shorter poem and that's one of many reasons I love the tried and true sonnet as much as I do, and limericks are only five lines after all.
I think shorter poems are more relevant than ever, considering how brief the average attention span has become.
I think shorter poems are more relevant than ever, considering how brief the average attention span has become.
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10th Oct 2022 5:16am
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10th Oct 2022 10:06am
No worries, I'll try again when I've written longer. It takes skill to draw in with 4 lines.
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10th Oct 2022 5:27am
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10th Oct 2022 1:32pm
My father, Time, is kind
to my mother; Sky
As my brothers; Trees
watch my sisters; Seas
10th Oct 2022 7:48pm
Four lines express what a hundred-page book cannot express
It is a connection with goodness, love, forgiveness, and keeping away from demonic actions
Thank you for this short poem, full of meaning
It is a connection with goodness, love, forgiveness, and keeping away from demonic actions
Thank you for this short poem, full of meaning
13th Oct 2022 4:45pm
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15th Oct 2022 6:21pm
Poignant meaning, after reading, the Satan's Doom passage in a Bible Study today, Revelation 20 v 7-10.
