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In Degrees
Of nakedness in degrees
turning out the porch light
in Autumn's equinox
as I walk with myself
and talk of being
a riveter on the bridge
with the best collection
of conscience free
without apology
by taking a deep breath
to be me
of nakedness in degrees
turning out the porch light
in Autumn's equinox
as I walk with myself
and talk of being
a riveter on the bridge
with the best collection
of conscience free
without apology
by taking a deep breath
to be me
of nakedness in degrees
Published 5th Oct 2022
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5th Oct 2022 3:29am
Dear A,
I think this poem has such a great degree of expression. I like how you literally turn out the light and then let the real you emerge as you feel comfortable. To me, that’s a great thing to be able to do. Know yourself. Terrific write.
H🌷
I think this poem has such a great degree of expression. I like how you literally turn out the light and then let the real you emerge as you feel comfortable. To me, that’s a great thing to be able to do. Know yourself. Terrific write.
H🌷
5th Oct 2022 1:02pm
