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Minimalism

It starts with a simple premise:
you want this

primal
not polite
you grab me
spank me
bind me
clamp me
cane me
whatever you want
whatever you need
i give myself to you

It's simple: you've earned my trust

and my nature
is to satisfy your nature

another simple premise
i'm out of sorts
perhaps disrespectful
you have me come to you
settle across your big warm lap
my world becomes simple
the floor
nervousness
your soft voice
firm commands
your heavy hand
smacking my bottom
warm glow
pleasant heat
hot
too hot
hell �

heaven

compatible natures
yang and yin
mutual respect
needs met

it's so simple
natural
minimal

enormous

everything

Written by Pinkdreams

Published 4th Oct 2022

#BDSM #happiness #minimalist

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Re. Minimalism

Northern_Soul (-Missy-)

4th Oct 2022 6:36pm

Now then.

I�m usually about ready to gouge out my own eyes when a BDSM piece appears round here. But this was written with a degree of intelligence that actually allowed me to read the whole piece through, and I�m glad I did.

The pure poetry of those last 5 lines tho� and it really sums up the lifestyle for me. I also completely adore how there was no full stop at the end, allowing the thought to continue well after the poem has finished.

Thank you for sharing this, much enjoyed on an emotional level.

-M