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Sway
Goin’ crazy
Got myself thinkin’ bout you
Close my eyes and you’re there
Look on my face gives it away
Must confess
I’ve got to tell you
No matter the time of day
All signs point to you
Lead the way
Baby let’s sway
I need you
Look into your eyes
We could make music
Harmonize the feels
The truth shall set us free
Won’t give up on you
Show me the way
Baby let’s sway
Never looking back
He don’t need to know
Without you the sun will die
Let’s make the impossible possible
There ain’t no stoppin love
There’s no right way
Baby let’s sway
Got myself thinkin’ bout you
Close my eyes and you’re there
Look on my face gives it away
Must confess
I’ve got to tell you
No matter the time of day
All signs point to you
Lead the way
Baby let’s sway
I need you
Look into your eyes
We could make music
Harmonize the feels
The truth shall set us free
Won’t give up on you
Show me the way
Baby let’s sway
Never looking back
He don’t need to know
Without you the sun will die
Let’s make the impossible possible
There ain’t no stoppin love
There’s no right way
Baby let’s sway
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Re. Sway
26th Sep 2022 4:12am
Dear H,
I think you have a song here. Top of the charts. It’s strong and vivid in its description of frenetic love and I really like that. Terrific piece.
H🌷
I think you have a song here. Top of the charts. It’s strong and vivid in its description of frenetic love and I really like that. Terrific piece.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Sway
26th Sep 2022 4:23am
Re. Sway
26th Sep 2022 4:13am
I can honest, without one doubt relate. Could've said it better myself. 🥰❤💯
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Re. Sway
26th Sep 2022 5:51am
Like Honoria, I think another good potential song. Got me thinking of composing a poem about 'Swaying bodies'.
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Re: Re. Sway
26th Sep 2022 5:58am
I would love to read! Thank you, Sir Solomon for always stopping by and for your oh so kind comments.
Re. Sway
26th Sep 2022 8:27am
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26th Sep 2022 11:47am
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26th Sep 2022 8:57am
Re. Sway
26th Sep 2022 12:26pm
I like this, very catchy. Sorry to be a bore but if he don't need to know, how will the truth ever set you free, lol?
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Re: Re. Sway
26th Sep 2022 2:21pm
You’re never a bore, Billy!
Who else can I discuss donuts with so intently??
Thank you for the support!
Who else can I discuss donuts with so intently??
Thank you for the support!
Re. Sway
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26th Sep 2022 4:15pm
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Re: Re. Sway
26th Sep 2022 4:22pm
Not really sure what you are referring to, lol!!
Thank you, Steve for your support, as always 😊
Thank you, Steve for your support, as always 😊
Re. Sway
27th Sep 2022 00:25am
Well look at you swaying!!
Love all of it.
For me it also has a song vibe to it.
Love all of it.
For me it also has a song vibe to it.
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