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Pinky Swear
Two iridescent ghosts
Looking for new hosts
Underground closer to hell
Leaving our red shells
Feels exhilarating
Spirits lifting
Since we agreed
We’d go together
Forget good God
Forget evil Devil
Somewhere different
Balanced enlightenment
We’ll spin the dead moon
Comets gracefully speeding by
Swivel the silver stars
Towards our golden start
Tunneling inside infinity
Pinky clasping pinky
Shuffling dimensions
Making decisions
On where to land
Timeless best friends
Together til the endless end
Promising always to be there
On a Pinky Swear
Looking for new hosts
Underground closer to hell
Leaving our red shells
Feels exhilarating
Spirits lifting
Since we agreed
We’d go together
Forget good God
Forget evil Devil
Somewhere different
Balanced enlightenment
We’ll spin the dead moon
Comets gracefully speeding by
Swivel the silver stars
Towards our golden start
Tunneling inside infinity
Pinky clasping pinky
Shuffling dimensions
Making decisions
On where to land
Timeless best friends
Together til the endless end
Promising always to be there
On a Pinky Swear
Published 22nd Sep 2022
| Edited 24th Sep 2022
Author's Note
For my best friend that I've know since 6th grade.
My girl Nellie!!!
Nellie sent me this through text when she read.
I always picked her up for school.
Had to share!!!
Too funny.
https://youtu.be/fbuFhKpH1KM
Also for my buddy Casper who asked me to write
something for him:) hahaha
Listening to Chevelle - Suffocating
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gpyRI1j9t6c
Don't ask why that song. LOL
My girl Nellie!!!
Nellie sent me this through text when she read.
I always picked her up for school.
Had to share!!!
Too funny.
https://youtu.be/fbuFhKpH1KM
Also for my buddy Casper who asked me to write
something for him:) hahaha
Listening to Chevelle - Suffocating
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gpyRI1j9t6c
Don't ask why that song. LOL
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22nd Sep 2022 5:05am
24th Sep 2022 2:53am
Hey Ron:)
Thanks for your snaps on this amigo.
So glad you enjoyed thanks
for the RL!!
Thanks for your snaps on this amigo.
So glad you enjoyed thanks
for the RL!!
22nd Sep 2022 12:43pm
Dear A,
There is nothing better or safer than knowing there is someone who has your back in good/bad/sad/mischievous times. No matter what they are your ride or die partners. I love the concept in this poem and found it very singable. Pinky swear this is a Great piece. H🌷
There is nothing better or safer than knowing there is someone who has your back in good/bad/sad/mischievous times. No matter what they are your ride or die partners. I love the concept in this poem and found it very singable. Pinky swear this is a Great piece. H🌷
24th Sep 2022 3:11am
Hi H!!
You are soooo right. We have been through a lot together
throughout the years. Boyfriends - parties - all of it!!
Gotta share this with you.
She texted me this when she read.
Too funny!!
https://youtu.be/fbuFhKpH1KM
You are soooo right. We have been through a lot together
throughout the years. Boyfriends - parties - all of it!!
Gotta share this with you.
She texted me this when she read.
Too funny!!
https://youtu.be/fbuFhKpH1KM
22nd Sep 2022 1:08pm
Beautiful symmetry and wordplay A...
You are a good friend and have a beautiful friendship...
You are a good friend and have a beautiful friendship...
24th Sep 2022 3:16am
Hey Buddy!!
You would love my little gangsta bff Cipher.
Great sense of humor and daring as all get out!!
She can box!!
Known her through everything good and bad.
Thanks for your snaps on this write.
She sent me this when she read.
Too funny.
A scene small clip from Clueless.
https://youtu.be/fbuFhKpH1KM
I'm Cher and she is Dionne with all her boyfriend drama. LOL
Picked her up every morning for school when I got my car.
You would love my little gangsta bff Cipher.
Great sense of humor and daring as all get out!!
She can box!!
Known her through everything good and bad.
Thanks for your snaps on this write.
She sent me this when she read.
Too funny.
A scene small clip from Clueless.
https://youtu.be/fbuFhKpH1KM
I'm Cher and she is Dionne with all her boyfriend drama. LOL
Picked her up every morning for school when I got my car.
22nd Sep 2022 6:51pm
You remind me of my sister
She's the cheerful one
Beautiful smile like yours
BIG LIKE
She's the cheerful one
Beautiful smile like yours
BIG LIKE
24th Sep 2022 3:22am
Hi PS:)
What a comment. Forget the poem - this comment
means the world. I've had a horrible month and you
just made me feel golden:)
I needed that - you have no idea:)
Sending you a big giant hug with a
big smooch on that moody cheek of yours.
Thank you sooo much!!!
What a comment. Forget the poem - this comment
means the world. I've had a horrible month and you
just made me feel golden:)
I needed that - you have no idea:)
Sending you a big giant hug with a
big smooch on that moody cheek of yours.
Thank you sooo much!!!
22nd Sep 2022 10:40pm
24th Sep 2022 3:27am
Well hello Bryan:)
What a nice surprise to see you dropping me a comment.
Kindred spirits are magic buddy. No need for proof - you just know
when you feel it:)
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.
Salud!!
What a nice surprise to see you dropping me a comment.
Kindred spirits are magic buddy. No need for proof - you just know
when you feel it:)
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.
Salud!!
24th Sep 2022 7:28pm
"I can't feel my chest ! So send the pain below..."
Their best song, by far. "Comfortable Liar" a close second. The music is insane.
It's so cool that you have that connection with your old pals. It's also awesome that they get rewarded by having such a cool friend as you! It's kinda like you're giving them a trophy, for winning your friendship, by writing about them.
Thelma and Louise, with a much better ending!
Awesome poetic antics, you have here. Thanks for the smile!
Their best song, by far. "Comfortable Liar" a close second. The music is insane.
It's so cool that you have that connection with your old pals. It's also awesome that they get rewarded by having such a cool friend as you! It's kinda like you're giving them a trophy, for winning your friendship, by writing about them.
Thelma and Louise, with a much better ending!
Awesome poetic antics, you have here. Thanks for the smile!
24th Sep 2022 7:34pm
Hey there:)
I just got off the phone with her before I wrote this. That
song as on in the background. LOL
I just found out she had been to the hospital due to covid and got
out the following morning. She had an I.V. put on for a few hours then got sent home. Said she thought she was going to die. Still sounded horrible on the phone.
I felt horrible since I had no clue.
She is my best buddy in the world when it comes to females.
That's what I'm here for amigo
To make ya smile:)
Have a great Saturday!!!
I just got off the phone with her before I wrote this. That
song as on in the background. LOL
I just found out she had been to the hospital due to covid and got
out the following morning. She had an I.V. put on for a few hours then got sent home. Said she thought she was going to die. Still sounded horrible on the phone.
I felt horrible since I had no clue.
She is my best buddy in the world when it comes to females.
That's what I'm here for amigo
To make ya smile:)
Have a great Saturday!!!
30th Oct 2022 6:11pm
A wonderfully written, joyous write! "light" in some ways, "deep" in others...easily understood and adopted by readers.
Great!
Ted
Great!
Ted
30th Oct 2022 11:36pm
Hi Ted
Thank you - just something I wanted to write for my
best friend. Known her forever. Since like 6th or 7th grade.
That far back is kinda blurry. LOL
Hope you're having a great Sunday amgio:)
Thanks for stopping by and commenting - glad you enjoyed
Thank you - just something I wanted to write for my
best friend. Known her forever. Since like 6th or 7th grade.
That far back is kinda blurry. LOL
Hope you're having a great Sunday amgio:)
Thanks for stopping by and commenting - glad you enjoyed
