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Eternal Darkness
The white noise of the nocturnal silence eludes the neurotic tendencies
The aphotic depths conceal the secrecy of thyself which the full moon attempts to illuminate against the ocean
All while attempting to hold an appearance of normalcy,
Despite the feeling of immense torment within thickening
The leaves of the weeping willow shiver piteously as they foresee all
Dethroned from my lair of comfort
Which was held in eternal darkness
Thus, the forlorn suffering of mine is now illuminated and displayed for all to see
The aphotic depths conceal the secrecy of thyself which the full moon attempts to illuminate against the ocean
All while attempting to hold an appearance of normalcy,
Despite the feeling of immense torment within thickening
The leaves of the weeping willow shiver piteously as they foresee all
Dethroned from my lair of comfort
Which was held in eternal darkness
Thus, the forlorn suffering of mine is now illuminated and displayed for all to see
Published 21st Sep 2022
Author's Note
This is about struggling with your mental health in secret and feeling ashamed once it begins to show and the uncomfortable feeling that comes with that type of vulnerability.
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21st Sep 2022 5:49am
Brownwidow,
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This is some expression that catches the eyes. If no one can understand this write, they not gone tell u at all. They will just read it and read it until the understanding comes. Also, I took your lines with my ah mind and switched them around upon the screen. Then, I read it put back together. This piece makes u wanna go to college and study a science like Cataclysmic Physics. Very interesting to me piece! Excellently well written!👍👁️👄🍜🥦🌽🥬💋👅🌷🍑
21st Sep 2022 1:03pm
