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angel of rancor

a murder crawl    
inching along the light festooned edifices  
like tombstones wrapped in string lights    
they say angels live here    
but i'm not so sure they know what angels are    
    
i could use a cigarette break    
maybe the sweet release of death    
either will do honestly    
   
an inch of road per soul reduction    
that's how this works    
erosion at a glacial crawl    
saties 'lent et douloureux' on a loop inside me    
   
the angels must be rancorous things
Written by Grae (Bryan Gray)
Published | Edited 10th Oct 2022
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