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Never Fade
My love,
You came to me broken
Afraid to trust and submerged in your pain
Moments turned into years
I waited as you learned to exhale
Letting go of demons and curses
Flourishing, you began to stand tall
Taking steps to believe in possibilities
No longer hiding in the shell you created
Celebrating your emergence
I watched as you began to dance
Tentative then confident, you braved your doubt
Traveling the road to forgiveness
The storm passed
Quietly, you began to shift your senses
I exhaled as your flight ascended
Taking the love I gave as security
No longer wandering
Free from the bondage of scars
Awake, you left
And no matter the path you chose
My love for you will never fade
You came to me broken
Afraid to trust and submerged in your pain
Moments turned into years
I waited as you learned to exhale
Letting go of demons and curses
Flourishing, you began to stand tall
Taking steps to believe in possibilities
No longer hiding in the shell you created
Celebrating your emergence
I watched as you began to dance
Tentative then confident, you braved your doubt
Traveling the road to forgiveness
The storm passed
Quietly, you began to shift your senses
I exhaled as your flight ascended
Taking the love I gave as security
No longer wandering
Free from the bondage of scars
Awake, you left
And no matter the path you chose
My love for you will never fade
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Re. Never Fade
19th Sep 2022 4:15pm
Re: Re. Never Fade
20th Sep 2022 5:09am
Hello, Wired.
Thank you. I appreciate the comment and I am holding you in my thoughts.
Take care.
Thank you. I appreciate the comment and I am holding you in my thoughts.
Take care.
Re: Re. Never Fade
20th Sep 2022 10:47am
Re. Never Fade
19th Sep 2022 5:08pm
Re: Re. Never Fade
20th Sep 2022 5:10am
Thank you, Ron for always stopping by. I am grateful for your friendship.
Take care and have a good day.
Take care and have a good day.
Re. Never Fade
19th Sep 2022 5:13pm
Dear H,
That was gorgeous. While I’m sorry to see the breakup tag attached, there is so much to take away from this piece for a current relationship. I really admired the giving and generous spirit from one to the other in this as a reminder i hope to emulate some of these behaviors. Lovely write. H🌷
That was gorgeous. While I’m sorry to see the breakup tag attached, there is so much to take away from this piece for a current relationship. I really admired the giving and generous spirit from one to the other in this as a reminder i hope to emulate some of these behaviors. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Never Fade
20th Sep 2022 5:13am
Thank you dear, Honoria for your kind words.
We are still friends, he and I. I will love him until the end of time, even if we are no longer together. I am grateful for the time we had.
We are still friends, he and I. I will love him until the end of time, even if we are no longer together. I am grateful for the time we had.
Re. Never Fade
19th Sep 2022 6:13pm
Lovely - you can be proud you helped him back on his feet in life, although he is now not sharing it with you.
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Re: Re. Never Fade
20th Sep 2022 5:15am
Hello, Sir Solomon. Thank you, always happy to hear from you.
I will always love this man. He has graced my life with his presence for many years. I look forward to continuing to know him, even if only in friendship.
I will always love this man. He has graced my life with his presence for many years. I look forward to continuing to know him, even if only in friendship.
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I admire women whose presence in the lives of their men has been good for the latter's confidence. An example in our day being our King Charles and Queen Camilla who go back decades further than their marriage. She probably was more his kind of woman than Diana sadly was but royal need for a 'pure' mother of heirs kept them apart..
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Re. Never Fade
20th Sep 2022 00:58am
Love the message in this. Helping someone you love
to be stronger and to grow into their own in confidence.
Great karma. It always comes back tenfold amiga:)
to be stronger and to grow into their own in confidence.
Great karma. It always comes back tenfold amiga:)
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Re: Re. Never Fade
20th Sep 2022 5:21am
Hello Adelphina. Thank you, so glad you enjoyed. He has my heart even though we were together for only a short while. We have known each other for many years. I will always love him.
Re. Never Fade
20th Sep 2022 1:54am
VERY MUCH relatable..tho for me the shoe was worn by me with his love, compassion, etc... until we parted ways. 🥰 HUGS and LOVE ❤
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Re: Re. Never Fade
20th Sep 2022 5:24am
Hello, Philis. Yes, we do seem to have much in common. So glad to have you along for the ride, my friend. HUGS and LOVE.
Re. Never Fade
21st Sep 2022 5:20pm
Hey Mary, I am trying to get some reading in finally. Sorry it took so long, still struggling but I am glad I came across this one. It's so supportive and it shows the power a person can have when helping someone recover from the past and even trauma that can leave you so broken. When someone takes your heart and soul and abuse that for their own gain it causes so much damage. Some people just don't care as long as they get what they want. But anyway, I digress... when you support someone's recovery I think that's an incredible thing to give someone but it can so difficult too if that person is no longer with you. Still I think that gift provides so much back to you in the way of karma and growth. And what's to come should be even better. Each person we influence in our lives for the better makes an impact on the heart and soul. It makes us better and when you can appreciate that and see the good in it then it moved you forward in life. Still you cannot help but miss them until that space is filled, but it will be filled because you have so much love and passion. That's something that will always be irresistible and desired. And the next thing is often so much better.
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Re: Re. Never Fade
23rd Sep 2022 11:44am
Thank you, Kristina.
I will always support him and his endeavors, even though we no longer have the relationship of my dreams. He has my heart.
I will always support him and his endeavors, even though we no longer have the relationship of my dreams. He has my heart.
Re. Never Fade
24th Sep 2022 12:45pm
Having someone's heart is noble
The is an astonishing write
I been on both sides of relationships like this
BIG LIKE WRITE
The is an astonishing write
I been on both sides of relationships like this
BIG LIKE WRITE
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Re. Never Fade
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- Edited 26th Sep 2022 12:07pm
26th Sep 2022 12:06pm
Wonderful piece! Accepting someone broken, helping them rebuild themselves through your love n care... It's truly a wonderful thing to do.... He is the lucky one, dear poetess. But to leave you he made a huge mistake n that's really sad. Anyway Lovely message of hope, strength n love 🌹

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Re: Re. Never Fade
26th Sep 2022 12:09pm
Thank you. Every day I feel as if I should thank him for gracing my life so sweetly.
Enjoy your day :)
Enjoy your day :)