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Hope For New Love
Published 19th Sep 2022
Author's Note
A rewrite of an earlier poem as I think back to the ending of my marriage and the promise of new love.
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19th Sep 2022 7:14am
Pleasure to read again. Favourite lines, that convey the emotion of the time:
My mind is weary from brokenness,
but my body finds strength
as his eyes minister to my heart.
My fingers move with care to
touch the firmness of his desire,
all new to me.
My mind is weary from brokenness,
but my body finds strength
as his eyes minister to my heart.
My fingers move with care to
touch the firmness of his desire,
all new to me.
19th Sep 2022 12:39pm
20th Sep 2022 2:00am
20th Sep 2022 2:17pm
I’ve been divorced,it’s amazing looking back at how I felt around that time.this poem made me think of those dark feelings.definitely feel much better now lol.good writing here.
20th Sep 2022 11:44pm
Were there at any point any feelings of déjà vu?
If maybe this felt like a familiar ritual which you had been through so many other times before.
The person may be new but actions and movements in many ways may be the same if some things have become instinctive and habitual.
If maybe this felt like a familiar ritual which you had been through so many other times before.
The person may be new but actions and movements in many ways may be the same if some things have become instinctive and habitual.
24th Sep 2022 1:12pm
“My mind is weary from brokenness “ is such a powerful and touching line, especially within the context of what is happening in this piece.
