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beset
beguile the wicked truth
spill in guises of red
it turns inside me
I scream silently then I get in the driver's seat
taking over I rise
my bile bubbles so I must speak
lecherous greed so needy takes a swing
I counter deflecting the ulcer
specters spectate on my need
placing bets the odds are against me
I take my time making my moves
strategize then boom
finesse the dark and turn it into art
it speaks volumes
I tap into the bleak and break open the tomes
I hit the switches then turn um
it's eternal you know?
the voices we speak with today
will echo back and bite us in the ass
so watch it
bitter lust has beset me
I deal with the sultry
I suspect I'm in too deep
wickedness smiles and goes down on me
sated, I scream
Published 16th Sep 2022
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17th Sep 2022 3:08am
Hi Crimsin,
This is just wow!!
Strategizing the boom.
Awesome line - and honestly so true in
real life. hahaha
Awesome write chica:)
This is just wow!!
Strategizing the boom.
Awesome line - and honestly so true in
real life. hahaha
Awesome write chica:)
21st Sep 2022 9:47pm
hello beautiful Adelphina thank you graciously lovely one for feeling this and the wonderful comment 💕
Anonymous
17th Sep 2022 5:31am
If there's one thing you do so extraordinarily well it's finesse the dark and turn it into art!! Ohh my, what an outstanding observation that's utterly spot on. 👌🏻
This is a powerhouse of a piece...and I deeply felt it's intensely, like coming in from the bitter cold to be all encompassed by roaring furnace... it's immediate and potent.
Fantastic ink, dear lady
🌹 💙-🖤
B
This is a powerhouse of a piece...and I deeply felt it's intensely, like coming in from the bitter cold to be all encompassed by roaring furnace... it's immediate and potent.
Fantastic ink, dear lady
🌹 💙-🖤
B
21st Sep 2022 9:49pm
hello beautiful Blue thank you lovely one for such a gracious comment you gifted me smiles today...I like these darker writes sometimes I'm happy they speak to you too... it's difficult at times because they aren't for everyone I deeply appreciate the love you show me 💕
21st Sep 2022 1:41pm
21st Sep 2022 9:49pm
23rd Sep 2022 7:45pm
There is something ominous about the second stanza that also comes out as erotic. It's a great combination.
Well penned.
Well penned.
