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Falling: 9/13/2022

...instead of going straight to sleep at 3:00 am in the morning, no doubt exhausted, you, in the most quiet-gentle way possible, made your way under the duvet, taking care not to wake me, though I must admit I was half awake - somewhere between a dream and reality, i felt your arms gently wrap around me, your body curl up around my body, and your quiet quiet voice whisper to the nape of my neck "I love you, i love you...i love you" if you didn't for the world of you want to stir my sleep, but just couldn't not tell me ..and i don't think i've ever felt the full force of those words from a man until then.. "I love you too"
Written by Umm
Author's Note
might be too sappy,
but oh well, it's how i feel :)
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