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Pioneering Response

(ˇ)  
unyielding harmonies  
sparse  
indecorous
ornaments  
rise of dreamt conquest  
merging intersections,  
.... shapes  
folds... .
her tapestry of minutiae  
overflowing an instant  
rages hard  
turbulent waters  
swelling arcs  
entangling  
seducement  
in profound pierces  
thin, is the veil  
of absent or never was  
 
(ˇˇ)  
intense rapturous  
punctuations  
exclaim!  
reclaim...revive  
flesh and bone  
pressing  
palpitating  
life and loving... into response  
into meaning  
responding  
becomes will  
and sweaty communion  
 
(ˇˇˇ)  
monochromatic  
bursts  
phantasmagoric  
colors convulse  
release,  
freedom flows  
     . .. of dewy 'morn  
burning new discovery....  
where wild urgencies  
are sweetest tastes  
torn  
      honed,  
tightened  
well worn  
sowed of wicked want  
wonderment  
 
(ˇˇˇ-ˇ)  
snared upon  
torment and sensuality  
we concave hearts  
contract—  
restrict  
perfectly (r)tight  
      .... responding  
responding....  
  {whispers}  
 
   responding.  
 
/.  
 
slow.  
breaths.  
 
.\  
 
(ˇˇˇ-ˇˇ)  
foreshadowing  
the way  
feeding oxygen  
sucking...  
gulping deep . . . to excite  
O'vicious air  
of  
You  
 
(ˇˇˇ-ˇˇˇ)  
hints  
permeate being  
to blood  
blowing through me-  
my hair - my soul  
dusting my tongue  
flavored in delicate destiny  
like a horde  
of fallen angels  
erupting in sacred  
erotic hymns  
savory sacrilege  
dangles dare  
tantalizing  
temptation  
rallying  
hearts  
into  
a  
convergence  
with minds  
in  
ultimate.  
discovery
.  
.  
.  
.  
.  
we, pioneers.  
 
 ~~~  
 
 
 
Bluevelvete
Written by Bluevelvete
Published | Edited 11th Sep 2022
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