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lie
the lies i speak
burn my tongue
but i continue to let the fire live
a forest fire
a small flame
a blanket of ash
destroys
burn my tongue
but i continue to let the fire live
a forest fire
a small flame
a blanket of ash
destroys
Author's Note
i've had this poem saved on my phone for like a year
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Re. lie
8th Sep 2022 4:14pm
Re. lie
There's no surprise that you have kept this for so long.
It's revealing the truth that so many of us are reluctant to admit.
This song by 2 Chainz called No Lie ft. Drake you can make of it what you will.
It's just another window that shows us where we are at as a society in these present times.
So that blazing inferno is burning all around and by the time others feel it, it may be too late.
It's revealing the truth that so many of us are reluctant to admit.
This song by 2 Chainz called No Lie ft. Drake you can make of it what you will.
It's just another window that shows us where we are at as a society in these present times.
So that blazing inferno is burning all around and by the time others feel it, it may be too late.
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Re: Re. lie
9th Sep 2022 2:20am
Admitting your lies is already a big step.
Acknowledging the domino effect of them in another.
Our life will be doomed if we live in that way of sin.
Honesty is part of the key.
Acknowledging the domino effect of them in another.
Our life will be doomed if we live in that way of sin.
Honesty is part of the key.
Re: Re. lie
9th Sep 2022 2:21am
Re. lie
9th Sep 2022 5:09pm
A lie can save, but also expand into an uncontrollable darkness of a world of it's own.
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Re: Re. lie
9th Sep 2022 5:12pm
Re. lie
12th Sep 2022 7:38pm